Snoweagle walked through the dark part of the forest and approached the scent markers. He turned to see Nightpaw running after him. Nightpaw had become his apprentice over the past moon. But Lightkit remained Lightkit. It was a danger for her to be a apprentice, because of her spasms. She had one for a cat named Greypool, Deadfoot, Bluestar, Gorsepaw...
Snoweagle shook his head to clear his thoughts. What next? Nightpaw trotted slightly behind Snoweagle, then raced ahead. They approached the border carefully. A patrol on the other side appeared. In the patrol was Flamingpelt, Ruin, and Hate.
"Oh, i see your favorites again, Ruin." Nightpaw sneered.
"Oh, i see the useless kit with the deaf warrior." Hate sneered back. Nightpaw gaped, shocked.
"sensitive." Riun noted. His face broke into a smile. "Good."
"Don't." Nightpaw said fiercely.
All of a sudden, Hate lashed out at Nightpaw. "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" Screeched Nightpaw. Shivering, he backed away. He eyed the patrol for a few moments, then fled into the bushes. Snoweagle reluctantly followed him. AAAAugh. He thought.
AN: y u afraid? Oh yeah. for reasons. Yes! i made it through!
Saturday, June 22, 2013
Wednesday, June 19, 2013
Chapter 18: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Snoweagle walked through the dark part of the forest and approached the scent markers. He turned to see Nightpaw running after him. Nightpaw had become his apprentice over the past moon. But Lightkit remained Lightkit. It was a danger for her to be a apprentice, because of her spasms. She had one for a cat named Greypool, Deadfoot, Bluestar, Gorsepaw...
Snoweagle shook his head to clear his thoughts. Who next? Nightpaw ran ahead to the border.
"Hurry up!" Nightpaw called. But of course Snowagle did not hear him. He was deaf.
"Hey!" said Snoweagle. "I read the word WAS!"
The author sighed. "Then it is is."
"NOOOO Now i'm deaf again?!" said Snoweagle.
"What?" called Nightpaw.
"Lines." said the Author.
"Oh yeah!!!" Replied Nightpaw. "Snoweagle! Hurry up- or come- AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"
"What now?" sighed the author.
"I forgot my lines" said Nightpaw, sadly.
"I think we should try this again." said Snoweagle. Ruin walked in with a fresh cup of cofee.
"What's going on?" Ruin asked.
"COFEEEEEEE!" yelled Nightpaw.
"I should not have brought this while we were doing this." said Ruin, regretably. "And i messed up my lines." Ruin facepalmed himself.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"
yelled the Author. "CUT!"
AN: I was left alone for a while and i had no story ideas, and i thought, "This is still good" so i decided to plublish it. BAD ME BAD ME! *Hits self with hammer* ow
Snoweagle shook his head to clear his thoughts. Who next? Nightpaw ran ahead to the border.
"Hurry up!" Nightpaw called. But of course Snowagle did not hear him. He was deaf.
"Hey!" said Snoweagle. "I read the word WAS!"
The author sighed. "Then it is is."
"NOOOO Now i'm deaf again?!" said Snoweagle.
"What?" called Nightpaw.
"Lines." said the Author.
"Oh yeah!!!" Replied Nightpaw. "Snoweagle! Hurry up- or come- AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"
"What now?" sighed the author.
"I forgot my lines" said Nightpaw, sadly.
"I think we should try this again." said Snoweagle. Ruin walked in with a fresh cup of cofee.
"What's going on?" Ruin asked.
"COFEEEEEEE!" yelled Nightpaw.
"I should not have brought this while we were doing this." said Ruin, regretably. "And i messed up my lines." Ruin facepalmed himself.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"
yelled the Author. "CUT!"
AN: I was left alone for a while and i had no story ideas, and i thought, "This is still good" so i decided to plublish it. BAD ME BAD ME! *Hits self with hammer* ow
Friday, June 7, 2013
Chapter 17: Love
Snoweagle slashed at Ruins sides, but he dodged. Ruin turned around and landed a hard blow on Snoweagle's head. Then, Ruin pinned him down. Ruin's weight was too much, so all Snoweagle could do was struggle under Ruin. Suddenly, he saw a flash of brown. Cricketpaw was slashing at Ruin's back. Snoweagle took this chance to swipe at Ruin's belly, but missed. He was still a little Dizzy.
The bushes rustled as re-enforcements rushed in. Snoweagle could pick out Flamingpelt among them. Back already? Snoweagle thought. He saw Flamingpelt rush right by him. No...no! Snoweagle thought. Flamingpelt was picking his way across the battlefield, rushing at Lightkit.
"AHHHHH! Stop! Stop!" Screamed Lightkit was loud as she could. Snoweagle swiped at Ruin's belly, landing a blow, then left Cricketpaw to fight Ruin. He had to save Lightkit. After all, Lightkit was his step-sibling. Snoweagle yanked Flamingpelt's tail and then jumped on his back.
"Lightkit! RUUUUUUUUUN!" Yelled Snoweagle as he scratched Flamingpelt's back. Flamingpelt rushed off... only to jump ON Lightning and squash him. Snoweagle spotted Frostflight struggling under a goon. Snoweagle swiped at the goon, then sent it fleeing into the bushes.
"Thanks." said Frostflight.
"Your'e welcome." replied Snoweagle. He could feel himself blushing.
"What do you think happened to Fear?" asked Frostflight.
"I think they may have fought," said Snoweagle. "Look at theses cats. I think they must fight every day."
"Yeah," Said Frostflight. Snoweagle looked around. The enemies were fleeing into the bushes. He picked out Ruin's pelt, and then Hate's. Ruin screamed something surprisingly inaudible, then rushed out of camp. Finally, the battle had stopped. "Err...I'm going to go see how Lightkit is doing." said Frostflight.
Snoweagle looked after her. I have special feelings for her. Snoweagle thought. Then he realized something. Am I in LOVE?
AN: First comes love, then comes.. um... marriage, then comes the baby in the... um... Moss!
The bushes rustled as re-enforcements rushed in. Snoweagle could pick out Flamingpelt among them. Back already? Snoweagle thought. He saw Flamingpelt rush right by him. No...no! Snoweagle thought. Flamingpelt was picking his way across the battlefield, rushing at Lightkit.
"AHHHHH! Stop! Stop!" Screamed Lightkit was loud as she could. Snoweagle swiped at Ruin's belly, landing a blow, then left Cricketpaw to fight Ruin. He had to save Lightkit. After all, Lightkit was his step-sibling. Snoweagle yanked Flamingpelt's tail and then jumped on his back.
"Lightkit! RUUUUUUUUUN!" Yelled Snoweagle as he scratched Flamingpelt's back. Flamingpelt rushed off... only to jump ON Lightning and squash him. Snoweagle spotted Frostflight struggling under a goon. Snoweagle swiped at the goon, then sent it fleeing into the bushes.
"Thanks." said Frostflight.
"Your'e welcome." replied Snoweagle. He could feel himself blushing.
"What do you think happened to Fear?" asked Frostflight.
"I think they may have fought," said Snoweagle. "Look at theses cats. I think they must fight every day."
"Yeah," Said Frostflight. Snoweagle looked around. The enemies were fleeing into the bushes. He picked out Ruin's pelt, and then Hate's. Ruin screamed something surprisingly inaudible, then rushed out of camp. Finally, the battle had stopped. "Err...I'm going to go see how Lightkit is doing." said Frostflight.
Snoweagle looked after her. I have special feelings for her. Snoweagle thought. Then he realized something. Am I in LOVE?
AN: First comes love, then comes.. um... marriage, then comes the baby in the... um... Moss!
Thursday, June 6, 2013
Chapter 16: Battle and Message
Snoweagle was thinking about Lightkit. Again, she recovered, but was noticably weaker. Suddenly, Lightkit tumbled and did not get up.
"Greypool..." She whispered. Snoweagle expected her eyes to close, but they were wide open.
"AAAAUUGH!" Lightkit screamed. Then was the time her eyes closed.
"What.... " Said Snoweagle. "What...." Suddenly, Moss rushed out of her den.
"Echofeather!" Moss screamed. Echofeather appeared suddenly, carrying some herbs. Then she looked at Lightkit. Echofeather glanced at Moss, then at something lurking in the bushes. She started to say something, but one of Fear's goons tore out.
"You-" said Moss. "DID YOU DO THIS?!?!" She screamed. "LOOK what you have DONE!"
"QUIET," Said the goon. Everyone present froze in terror. Raincloud, Cricketpaw, and Frostflight came back from the hunting patrol. They dropped their prey and ran over, glaring. "I come with a message," the goon parked. "I am the new leader of Fear's Tribe."
"Wh.....WHAAAAAAAATTT?" Everybody gasped. Wing came out of her den. Suddenly, she saw the branches rustle. And out comes Flamingpelt and another goon.
"You have met Flamingpelt," said the new leader goon. Moss took a step forward. "This other one is Hate." Hate, on the leader goon's right side, had a pelt as dark as night and red, blazing eyes.
"We will begin this 'talk' shortly." said Flamingpelt as she looked over Wing. Some goons were dragging Lightning out of this den. Hate sneered. Raincloud took a step forward.
" I am Ruin." said the leader goon.
" I suppose you have a VERY good reason for DRAGGING me out here." said Lightning, glaring at each enemy. The goons that dragged Lightning went behind Flamingpelt and Hate. What is going on? thought Snoweagle.
" To make sure that you don't try to get answers," said Ruin. "I..will...give...you...THIS!" Ruin lunged at Lightning. A battle had begun. Snoweagle ran at Flamingpelt and began tearing at his fur with his claws. Flamingpelt slashed at Snoweagle's claws and Snoweagle let go. Flamingpelt lunged at Snoweagle's neck, but missed.
"Take this! And that!" Snoweagle yowled as he swiped at Flamingpelt. "And some of these!" Snoweagle yelled as he tore at Flamingpelt's legs. but Flamingpelt dodged, and landed a long slice across Snoweagle's back. Snoweagle became enraged. Traitor! he thought was he sent Flamingpelt into the woods.
"I'll get you! You just wait!" Yowled Flamingpelt as he disappeared into the woods. He looked over at Lightning, who was struggling under Ruin. Snoweagle slashed at Ruins back. Ruin turned around and slashed at Snoweagle's ear. Snoweagle drew up his claws to slash at Ruin's nose, but Ruin pinned Snoweagle down. What a weight! Snoweagle thought.
"This ends HERE, kittypet." Ruin sneered. Kittypet... Kittypet... Snoweagle remembered Fireheart, one of Thunderclan's greatest. He was such a fighter, even though he used to be a kittypet. Fireheart did not give up, and neither should he!
"I'm no kittypet," whispered Snoweagle. "I'm a WARRIOR!"
AN: Bum bum buuuuuuummmm!
"Greypool..." She whispered. Snoweagle expected her eyes to close, but they were wide open.
"AAAAUUGH!" Lightkit screamed. Then was the time her eyes closed.
"What.... " Said Snoweagle. "What...." Suddenly, Moss rushed out of her den.
"Echofeather!" Moss screamed. Echofeather appeared suddenly, carrying some herbs. Then she looked at Lightkit. Echofeather glanced at Moss, then at something lurking in the bushes. She started to say something, but one of Fear's goons tore out.
"You-" said Moss. "DID YOU DO THIS?!?!" She screamed. "LOOK what you have DONE!"
"QUIET," Said the goon. Everyone present froze in terror. Raincloud, Cricketpaw, and Frostflight came back from the hunting patrol. They dropped their prey and ran over, glaring. "I come with a message," the goon parked. "I am the new leader of Fear's Tribe."
"Wh.....WHAAAAAAAATTT?" Everybody gasped. Wing came out of her den. Suddenly, she saw the branches rustle. And out comes Flamingpelt and another goon.
"You have met Flamingpelt," said the new leader goon. Moss took a step forward. "This other one is Hate." Hate, on the leader goon's right side, had a pelt as dark as night and red, blazing eyes.
"We will begin this 'talk' shortly." said Flamingpelt as she looked over Wing. Some goons were dragging Lightning out of this den. Hate sneered. Raincloud took a step forward.
" I am Ruin." said the leader goon.
" I suppose you have a VERY good reason for DRAGGING me out here." said Lightning, glaring at each enemy. The goons that dragged Lightning went behind Flamingpelt and Hate. What is going on? thought Snoweagle.
" To make sure that you don't try to get answers," said Ruin. "I..will...give...you...THIS!" Ruin lunged at Lightning. A battle had begun. Snoweagle ran at Flamingpelt and began tearing at his fur with his claws. Flamingpelt slashed at Snoweagle's claws and Snoweagle let go. Flamingpelt lunged at Snoweagle's neck, but missed.
"Take this! And that!" Snoweagle yowled as he swiped at Flamingpelt. "And some of these!" Snoweagle yelled as he tore at Flamingpelt's legs. but Flamingpelt dodged, and landed a long slice across Snoweagle's back. Snoweagle became enraged. Traitor! he thought was he sent Flamingpelt into the woods.
"I'll get you! You just wait!" Yowled Flamingpelt as he disappeared into the woods. He looked over at Lightning, who was struggling under Ruin. Snoweagle slashed at Ruins back. Ruin turned around and slashed at Snoweagle's ear. Snoweagle drew up his claws to slash at Ruin's nose, but Ruin pinned Snoweagle down. What a weight! Snoweagle thought.
"This ends HERE, kittypet." Ruin sneered. Kittypet... Kittypet... Snoweagle remembered Fireheart, one of Thunderclan's greatest. He was such a fighter, even though he used to be a kittypet. Fireheart did not give up, and neither should he!
"I'm no kittypet," whispered Snoweagle. "I'm a WARRIOR!"
AN: Bum bum buuuuuuummmm!
Sunday, June 2, 2013
Chapter (I forgot): Echo
Snowpaw danced like a manicac. He had completed his warrior training! He rushed off, all the way to the field where he could scream his praise to Starclan.
"WOOOOOO-HOOOOOOO!" Snowpaw screamed. "IM GOING TO BE A WARRIOR!!!" Snowpaw screamed louder. "THUNDERCLAN DOUBTED ME, SUCKS FOR THEM!"
"Keep it down!" Yelled a voice. Snowpaw froze and blushed.
"Who are-err- where are you?" Snowpaw asked into the abyss of grass. He knew where she was, because the white Starclan cat and Sorrelkit had given him a gift of feeling sound waves a couple of nights ago.
"The name's Echo." Replied the voice. Snowpaw found Echo. A light gray she-cat with a white chest and paws was lying in a nest of grass. She also had two jay feathers behind her ear.
"I claimed this as MY territory." Echo hissed. She had used the element of surprise. Then Echo pounced. Snowpaw looked at her visible ribs. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Is she going to eat me??? Snowkit thought. Claws clashed as each blow was scored- only to give up.
"I-i give up." Echo panted only a short while after. Snowpaw could tell she hadn't eaten in a while. "I'm not cut out for fighting, anyway."
"Errr... I have some food at errr... my camp. you wanna come?" Snowpaw wasked.
"WOULD I? OF COURSE I WOULD!" Echo exclaimed. And off they went.
...
Snoweagle, Frostflight, Raincloud ( I know), and Cricketpaw watched below a pile of stones, now called the Stonepile. Echo was about to become a medicne cat, to take Moss's place. After the ceremony, Snoweagle walked over to Echo, Now named Echofeather.
" You got what you wanted," Snoweagle said. Echofeather turned around, shocked. "You are one of us." Snoweagle told her.
"So I did." Echofeather scowled and stalked away to her new den. Snoweagle looked just in time to see Moss moving her kits to the Nursery.
"Horray!" Nightkit yelled.
"Hooray!" Lightkit tried to yell. Even though Moss nursed her back to health, Lightkit was still a little weak. Suddenly, Lightkit staggered and fell. coughing, she looked up at the clear blue sky.
"Stonefur....." Lightkit gasped as she closed he eyes. Echofeather gaped.
"Wha......" Echofeather started to say. Something is defiantly wrong. Snoweagle thought.
AN: Yes, Cricketpaw did not get her warrior name because she was not ready. Thanks for Echo- or should i say Echofeather, Perry4464!
"WOOOOOO-HOOOOOOO!" Snowpaw screamed. "IM GOING TO BE A WARRIOR!!!" Snowpaw screamed louder. "THUNDERCLAN DOUBTED ME, SUCKS FOR THEM!"
"Keep it down!" Yelled a voice. Snowpaw froze and blushed.
"Who are-err- where are you?" Snowpaw asked into the abyss of grass. He knew where she was, because the white Starclan cat and Sorrelkit had given him a gift of feeling sound waves a couple of nights ago.
"The name's Echo." Replied the voice. Snowpaw found Echo. A light gray she-cat with a white chest and paws was lying in a nest of grass. She also had two jay feathers behind her ear.
"I claimed this as MY territory." Echo hissed. She had used the element of surprise. Then Echo pounced. Snowpaw looked at her visible ribs. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Is she going to eat me??? Snowkit thought. Claws clashed as each blow was scored- only to give up.
"I-i give up." Echo panted only a short while after. Snowpaw could tell she hadn't eaten in a while. "I'm not cut out for fighting, anyway."
"Errr... I have some food at errr... my camp. you wanna come?" Snowpaw wasked.
"WOULD I? OF COURSE I WOULD!" Echo exclaimed. And off they went.
...
Snoweagle, Frostflight, Raincloud ( I know), and Cricketpaw watched below a pile of stones, now called the Stonepile. Echo was about to become a medicne cat, to take Moss's place. After the ceremony, Snoweagle walked over to Echo, Now named Echofeather.
" You got what you wanted," Snoweagle said. Echofeather turned around, shocked. "You are one of us." Snoweagle told her.
"So I did." Echofeather scowled and stalked away to her new den. Snoweagle looked just in time to see Moss moving her kits to the Nursery.
"Horray!" Nightkit yelled.
"Hooray!" Lightkit tried to yell. Even though Moss nursed her back to health, Lightkit was still a little weak. Suddenly, Lightkit staggered and fell. coughing, she looked up at the clear blue sky.
"Stonefur....." Lightkit gasped as she closed he eyes. Echofeather gaped.
"Wha......" Echofeather started to say. Something is defiantly wrong. Snoweagle thought.
AN: Yes, Cricketpaw did not get her warrior name because she was not ready. Thanks for Echo- or should i say Echofeather, Perry4464!
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