Snowpaw padded into Moss's den. He hoped Sorrelkit would not die- live through the night. Moss was his foster mother, after all. He padded into the den, and nodded off.
...
Snowpaw woke up. He was in Starclan's forest again. He tried to run free through the warm, calling, woods, but trees barred his path. Suddenly, the Starclan cat came up.
"Your'e not a Starclan warrior yet- you can't pass through." She sighed. Snowpaw padded up to the Starclan cat. Her white fur was gentle and loving.
"How is Sorrelkit?" Snowpaw asked, having to peel himself away from the pure love radiating fron the Starclan cat.
"Oh, it seems we have a visitor." the Starclan cat meowed, turning to the woods. A small kit with a dappled tortoiseshell fur came forth. Snowpaw could not believe it.
"S-Sorrelkit!" Snowpaw gasped.
"Hello." said Sorrelkit. The stars weaved into Sorrelkit's fur shimmered. Her eyes shown with knowledge far beyond her age. Then Sorrelkit looked up.
"Morning is coming." she said. the Starclan cat and Sorrelkit said their goodbyes and padded into the woods.
"Wait! wait!" Snowpaw called. But he knew he was slipping away from Starclan's forest.
...
"My kit! No! Sorrelkit! Sorrelkit..." Yowls of horror roused Snowpaw. He opened his eyes and looked at Moss. Moss was bending over a small, lifeless, creature.
"Sorrelkit!"
AN: Sadly, nobody really voted. :'( Goodbye Sorrelkit!
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BAWWWWWLLLLLLLLL
Sunday, April 28, 2013
Friday, April 19, 2013
Chapter 12: Will Sorrelkit die?
Moss shoved Flamingpelt out of the way.
"Sorrelkit! Oh my poor kit!" Moss yowled. Moss turned to Flamingpelt. "How could you." Moss's voice was as cold as ice. Moss's other two kits huddled close to Lightning. Snowpaw padded over to Flamingpelt.
"I know where my claws struck." Flamingpelt meowed. "She'll die."
"That's not true." Frostpaw said was she padded over. Snowpaw felt his heart leap. What was Frostpaw doing?
"Yeah." Said Cricketpaw as she walked over to side with Frostpaw. Rainpaw padded over too.
"You'd better watch out." Rainpaw mewed. "Now that we really know who's side you are on, with will kill you." Flamingpelt looked at Sorrelkit, then Rainpaw. Flamingpelt's claws flashed out at Sorrelkit, scoring more claw marks. Then he vanished through the trees. Moss ran after him for a couple paces.
"Yeah, you'd better run!" Rainpaw yowled. Then he fell the the ground, laughing. Sorrelkit was still bleeding, now even heavier. The troop walked over to Sorrelkit and formed a tight barrier around Moss's three kits. Fear's warriors were coming closer, growling. The fight wasn't over. Sorrelkit's wounds were pouring a endless tide, and Sorrelkit's eyes were closing. Lightning looked at Sorrelkit.
"Retreat!" He yowled, and he picked up Sorrelkit ever so gently. The troop padded silently into the forest, deathly quiet.
AN: Snowkit will be visited by the Starclan cat that will reveal all. It was a tie, so I want everyone to vote! Otherwise, Sorrelkit will die! you have until Sunday! get to it!
"Sorrelkit! Oh my poor kit!" Moss yowled. Moss turned to Flamingpelt. "How could you." Moss's voice was as cold as ice. Moss's other two kits huddled close to Lightning. Snowpaw padded over to Flamingpelt.
"I know where my claws struck." Flamingpelt meowed. "She'll die."
"That's not true." Frostpaw said was she padded over. Snowpaw felt his heart leap. What was Frostpaw doing?
"Yeah." Said Cricketpaw as she walked over to side with Frostpaw. Rainpaw padded over too.
"You'd better watch out." Rainpaw mewed. "Now that we really know who's side you are on, with will kill you." Flamingpelt looked at Sorrelkit, then Rainpaw. Flamingpelt's claws flashed out at Sorrelkit, scoring more claw marks. Then he vanished through the trees. Moss ran after him for a couple paces.
"Yeah, you'd better run!" Rainpaw yowled. Then he fell the the ground, laughing. Sorrelkit was still bleeding, now even heavier. The troop walked over to Sorrelkit and formed a tight barrier around Moss's three kits. Fear's warriors were coming closer, growling. The fight wasn't over. Sorrelkit's wounds were pouring a endless tide, and Sorrelkit's eyes were closing. Lightning looked at Sorrelkit.
"Retreat!" He yowled, and he picked up Sorrelkit ever so gently. The troop padded silently into the forest, deathly quiet.
AN: Snowkit will be visited by the Starclan cat that will reveal all. It was a tie, so I want everyone to vote! Otherwise, Sorrelkit will die! you have until Sunday! get to it!
Tuesday, April 16, 2013
Sorrelkkit... Oh Sorrelkit....
Snowpaw looked down from his position in the tree... over Fear's camp... right...over...her...den. No wonder they call this place the Forest Of Shadows. Snowpaw thought. So dark and spooky. Snowpaw inched his way over to the wasp's nest and heard the drowsy zzzzzzzz.
"A-ok." Snowpaw whispered. A cold wind shook the branches and he latched on with his claws. He looked around the camp's border. Even though Fear's camp was at high activity, they did not notice their enemies above and around.
"Snowpaw?" asked Frostpaw. her station was below Snowpaw's. Yeah, he had thought. The best place to get stung by a hundred wasps coming at you.
"Yeah?" Snowpaw asked.
"That Flamingpelt seems a little... strange. It seems he actually LIKES Fear." Frostpaw meowed.
Snowpaw nearly fell out of the tree.
"Whaaaaat?" He yowled. Fear's campmates looked up at him. Great. Thought Snowpaw. They are going to notice the big, fluffy, snowball in the tree. And the exact thing happened. It was now or never. Snowpaw dropped the wasp nest. suddenly, the wind carried it to Flamingpelt.
"Starclan, NO!!" Snowpaw yelled. But then he saw something scary. Sorrelkit was under Flamingpelt, and Flamingpelt's claw was raised in a..... No... Snowpaw thought. The killing blow...
AN: Exciting. Should I kill Sorrelkit? Please comment your'e opinion!
"A-ok." Snowpaw whispered. A cold wind shook the branches and he latched on with his claws. He looked around the camp's border. Even though Fear's camp was at high activity, they did not notice their enemies above and around.
"Snowpaw?" asked Frostpaw. her station was below Snowpaw's. Yeah, he had thought. The best place to get stung by a hundred wasps coming at you.
"Yeah?" Snowpaw asked.
"That Flamingpelt seems a little... strange. It seems he actually LIKES Fear." Frostpaw meowed.
Snowpaw nearly fell out of the tree.
"Whaaaaat?" He yowled. Fear's campmates looked up at him. Great. Thought Snowpaw. They are going to notice the big, fluffy, snowball in the tree. And the exact thing happened. It was now or never. Snowpaw dropped the wasp nest. suddenly, the wind carried it to Flamingpelt.
"Starclan, NO!!" Snowpaw yelled. But then he saw something scary. Sorrelkit was under Flamingpelt, and Flamingpelt's claw was raised in a..... No... Snowpaw thought. The killing blow...
AN: Exciting. Should I kill Sorrelkit? Please comment your'e opinion!
Sunday, April 14, 2013
Chapter 10: The good cats' plan
Moss led the group trough the tall grass, with Flamingpelt, because, even if he broke the fourth wall, the did USE to be part of Fear's group.
"Ssssh." Moss whispered as she looked at Fear. Dust was with Fear. Snowpaw could hear fear clearly.
"Lightning's tribe is not here!" Fear said angirly.
"So what?" Dust said.
"We don't get to kill every one of them!" Fear growled. Kill. Snowpaw thought. Kill. They want to kill me?
"WE'd best get a move on and keep looking. They could be ANYWHERE." Fear said. Then Fear and Dust disappeared into Lightning's territory.
"It's time to attack Fear's camp." Moss said quietly. Snowpaw was about to yowl his anger to Starclan. Thet're so.. so.. Snowpaw couldn't think of a good word.
"Okay! Listen up!" Lightning yowled. "Ok, we will divide into two groups." Wing and your kits and Flamimingpelt, you are one group. Everyone else, another group. I'll take Moss's kits. Now go!"
Snowpaw watched as Frostpaw disappeared into the grass, fear showing in her eyes.
"Hey! Wait for me!" Snowpaw shouted.
"Shhhhh! Fear!" Cricketpaw said as she slid into disappearance. Snowpaw padded on with Moss until they reached a thick forest. Moss paused and called everyone together.
"Now." Moss said. "Gather up close, so we arn't heard. Everyone gathered close. "Now, here's the plan...
AN: Oooooh, a cliffhanger!
"Ssssh." Moss whispered as she looked at Fear. Dust was with Fear. Snowpaw could hear fear clearly.
"Lightning's tribe is not here!" Fear said angirly.
"So what?" Dust said.
"We don't get to kill every one of them!" Fear growled. Kill. Snowpaw thought. Kill. They want to kill me?
"WE'd best get a move on and keep looking. They could be ANYWHERE." Fear said. Then Fear and Dust disappeared into Lightning's territory.
"It's time to attack Fear's camp." Moss said quietly. Snowpaw was about to yowl his anger to Starclan. Thet're so.. so.. Snowpaw couldn't think of a good word.
"Okay! Listen up!" Lightning yowled. "Ok, we will divide into two groups." Wing and your kits and Flamimingpelt, you are one group. Everyone else, another group. I'll take Moss's kits. Now go!"
Snowpaw watched as Frostpaw disappeared into the grass, fear showing in her eyes.
"Hey! Wait for me!" Snowpaw shouted.
"Shhhhh! Fear!" Cricketpaw said as she slid into disappearance. Snowpaw padded on with Moss until they reached a thick forest. Moss paused and called everyone together.
"Now." Moss said. "Gather up close, so we arn't heard. Everyone gathered close. "Now, here's the plan...
AN: Oooooh, a cliffhanger!
Saturday, April 13, 2013
Chapter 9: Breaking the 4th wall and Flaningpelt
Snowpaw turned around and around in a feild outside the pride's territory. He knew this was part of the plan... but he was confused. Why? Why? Why? He asked over and over. Why? Why? Why? Suddenly, he noticed a rainbow, glittery wall. oooh! the 4th wall! I've only heard legends about it!?! Snowpaw walked over to the wall. I wonder... He thought. Snowpaw licked the wall. Snowpaw felt the ground rumble. He watched as the wall was shattered as a cat flew out. On the other side of the wall, a female twoleg with red hair stared angrily at the cat.
"hello." Said the cat. "I'm Flamingpelt. I come from Fear's tribe- but i was teleported out and brought on the other side of the 4th wall. the twoleg through me through the 4th wall."
Smowpaw looked at Flamingpelt, then at the shattered wall. Rainpaw walked up.
"oooh!!! You broke the 4th wall!!!!! I'm telling!" Rainpaw yelled. Then he ran off to tell Lightning.
"Uh-oh." said Snowpaw.
AN: Lol. This blog needed a chapter- so we have a funny one!
"hello." Said the cat. "I'm Flamingpelt. I come from Fear's tribe- but i was teleported out and brought on the other side of the 4th wall. the twoleg through me through the 4th wall."
Smowpaw looked at Flamingpelt, then at the shattered wall. Rainpaw walked up.
"oooh!!! You broke the 4th wall!!!!! I'm telling!" Rainpaw yelled. Then he ran off to tell Lightning.
"Uh-oh." said Snowpaw.
AN: Lol. This blog needed a chapter- so we have a funny one!
Thursday, April 11, 2013
Sunday, April 7, 2013
Chapter 8: Spy
Snowpaw woke up. It's moonhigh... he thought. ugh. who would be chatting now? Snowpaw peeped out of Moss's den. There was Dust- and Fear! Fear and Dust? Snowpaw thought. How could Dust be a traitor? Snowpaw walked over to Moss's nest. "Moss! Moss, wake up!" Snowpaw called. Moss woke up.
"Sno-" Moss started.
"Shhh!" Snowpaw told Moss. "Dust... Nevermind, ill show you." Snowpaw led Moss to the entrance. Moss gasped.
"But why Dust?' Asked Moss.
"I don't know." said Snowpaw. "Let's get the pride OUT OF HERE!" Quickly, quietly, Moss and Snowpaw led the cats out of the dens, and into the shadows.
"Cool- like a real warrior mission!" Frostpaw said.
"No, more like a mistake." Rainpaw growled, eyeing Dust.
"Mousebrain." Wing said quietly. Snowpaw watched Dust and Fear leave. Fear called to dust,
"And you are going to attack Lightning while he's asleep?' Fear asked. Lightning growled and stepped forward.
"Yes." Dust called back.
"Good. My minions will take care of the others. How weak they are." Fear sneered as she spoke. "You are lucky you are on my side, or else you would be dead by now. Snowpaw shuddered.
"Mommy, she gonna get us?" Sorrelkit asked.
"No. We will hide and trick Fear and her group." Moss told her kit.
AN: Soooooo.... Help. I need story ideas.
"Sno-" Moss started.
"Shhh!" Snowpaw told Moss. "Dust... Nevermind, ill show you." Snowpaw led Moss to the entrance. Moss gasped.
"But why Dust?' Asked Moss.
"I don't know." said Snowpaw. "Let's get the pride OUT OF HERE!" Quickly, quietly, Moss and Snowpaw led the cats out of the dens, and into the shadows.
"Cool- like a real warrior mission!" Frostpaw said.
"No, more like a mistake." Rainpaw growled, eyeing Dust.
"Mousebrain." Wing said quietly. Snowpaw watched Dust and Fear leave. Fear called to dust,
"And you are going to attack Lightning while he's asleep?' Fear asked. Lightning growled and stepped forward.
"Yes." Dust called back.
"Good. My minions will take care of the others. How weak they are." Fear sneered as she spoke. "You are lucky you are on my side, or else you would be dead by now. Snowpaw shuddered.
"Mommy, she gonna get us?" Sorrelkit asked.
"No. We will hide and trick Fear and her group." Moss told her kit.
AN: Soooooo.... Help. I need story ideas.
Thursday, April 4, 2013
Chapter 7: Start of a clan
Snowkit woke up. Today's the day! he thought. Today is the day I start a clan- with a game. Snowkit padded out of Moss's den, taking care not to wake the kits. The clan seemed busy. I wonder what's up with everyone? he thought as he padded over to his friends.
"Hi Snowkit!" Frost, Rain, and Cricket yelled together.
"Hi, Frost, Rain, Cricket." said Snowkit. "Today, let's play Clan."
"How?" Asked Cricket. Snowkit explained how a clan works.
"And we are apprentice-age, so let's use apprentice names. I'll be Snowpaw." Snowkit said.
"Then i'm Rainpaw!" said Rain.
"I'm Cricketpaw." said Cricket.
"I'm Frostpaw!" said Frost. "Let's play." For a while, Snowpaw, Rainpaw, Frostpaw, and Cricketpaw decided on mentors.
"Can i be Lightning's apprentice?" asked Frostpaw.
"You can pretend that you are." said Snowpaw.
"I wanna be Wing's apprentice." said Cricketpaw.
"You can, i guess, although i've never heard of it." said Snowpaw.
"I'm gonna be Dust's apprentice." said Rainpaw.
"You can't be Dust's, she's a elder, but well see. I'm Moss's." said Snowpaw. "Now we need a clan name."
"Frostclan!" said Frostpaw. everyone agreed, it seemed like a name, and nobody realized Frostclan was just like Frostpaw's name.
AN: Lol.
"Hi Snowkit!" Frost, Rain, and Cricket yelled together.
"Hi, Frost, Rain, Cricket." said Snowkit. "Today, let's play Clan."
"How?" Asked Cricket. Snowkit explained how a clan works.
"And we are apprentice-age, so let's use apprentice names. I'll be Snowpaw." Snowkit said.
"Then i'm Rainpaw!" said Rain.
"I'm Cricketpaw." said Cricket.
"I'm Frostpaw!" said Frost. "Let's play." For a while, Snowpaw, Rainpaw, Frostpaw, and Cricketpaw decided on mentors.
"Can i be Lightning's apprentice?" asked Frostpaw.
"You can pretend that you are." said Snowpaw.
"I wanna be Wing's apprentice." said Cricketpaw.
"You can, i guess, although i've never heard of it." said Snowpaw.
"I'm gonna be Dust's apprentice." said Rainpaw.
"You can't be Dust's, she's a elder, but well see. I'm Moss's." said Snowpaw. "Now we need a clan name."
"Frostclan!" said Frostpaw. everyone agreed, it seemed like a name, and nobody realized Frostclan was just like Frostpaw's name.
AN: Lol.
Wednesday, April 3, 2013
Chapter 6: Learning + Moss's kits!
Snowkit looked up. A moon had passed since Fear had stolen him and his friends. In that time, Snowkit learned Moss was a medicne cat, a healer. "Good morning, Snowkit!" Said Moss. "Can you get me some tansy?" she asked. Huh? what is tansy? wondered Snowkit. "What does tansy look like?" Snowkit asked. Moss described the tansy, and Snowkit brought it to her. "Thanks, Snowkit." said Moss.
Just then, Dust walked in. "Moss!" Dust bellowed. "Whatta ya need, Dust?" Moss called from inside the den.
"I got myself that stomach pain. AGAIN. STUFF NOW, TALK LATTER." Dust said grumpily. Moss "served" Dust the herbs, and Dust forced herself to choke it down. Dust has had that stomach pain for a long tine it seems. Thought Snowkit. Maybe she won't get better from it. Snowkit walked over to Moss. "Why'd you need the tansy?" Snowkit asked Moss. "Because my kit's are coming, and i need to ease the pain." "Ok!" Said Snowkit. "I'm going to play with Cricket and Frost, K'?" "Ok" said Moss. Snowkit walked outside.
It's so peaceful! Thought Snowkit... Until he saw Cricket and Frost. "ROOAR I'm the mighty Lightning!" bellowed Frost. "GRRRR I'm the awesome Fear!" Screamed Cricket. Rain went over to cricket. "YOU think FEAR is AWESOME?!" Asked Rain. "No-" Started Cricket, she was broke off by Frost. "Rain! stop doing captital word, uncaptital word!" Frost yelled at Rain. "Your confusing the reader!" The arguement was broke by Moss yelling, "Snowkit! My kits!"
Snowkit rushed to Moss's den. Already, there were 3 kits. Snowkit felt her belly. There were no more. Snowkit started up the kit's heartbeats. There was a black one, a white one, and a golden one. Awww. They look so sweet! Snowkit thought as they started to suckle. "Can you give them clan names?" asked Snowkit.
"How?" asked Moss. "Just choose a name, like Shadow, and add "kit" to the end." Snowkit explained. "Then the black one is Nightkit, the Golden one is Sorrelkit, and the white one is... Oh! Lightkit!" Moss said.
...
Goodnight, Nightkit, Sorrelkit, Lightkit. Snowkit thought as he drifted off into sleep.
AN: Yay! Finally! Kits! Yes, Snowkit will ask for a apprentice name next, After they play the "Game"
Tuesday, April 2, 2013
Chapter 5: Escape from Fear. Find your Destiny.
Rain looked up at Fear. Fear looked down at Rain.
"Where is our mom?" Rain asked.
"Somewhere secret." Fear replied coldly. Rain stood up and looked Fear in the eye bravely. That Rain... does he even know who fear is? Snowkit wondered. "Do you somehow have mom?" Rain said coldly. "Rain. My friends will take care of her." Fear gave Rain the evil eye as she spoke. Rain sat down. He hid behind Frost, who was looking up at Fear. "Fear, our mommies will rescue us! Just you wait!" Frost yowled. Fear glared at Frost. Suddenly, Fear unsheathed her claws and attacked Frost. "Moss! Moss! Help us! Moss!" Snowkit suddenly yelled out without thinking. He saw claws flash at his face. Everything went black.
...
Snowkit woke up. He was in a shimmering, starry forest. A white cat padded up to Snowkit. "Who are you?" Snowkit asked. He could hear! "Do not be afraid." The starry cat told him. "You are brave. You are DESTINED to turn this pride into a great clan." "How?" Snowkit asked. " First, tell your friends about playing clan. Then, slowly turn it into the real thing." the Starclan cat replied, smiling.
"But why these cats?" Snowkit asked.
"Sit down. I will tell you a story." Said the cat.
The story began. "Long ago, there was 5 clans, Thunderclan, Shadowclan, Windclan, Riverclan, and Skyclan. They all lived in harmony for a while, and frighted only sometimes. Then, one day, Skyclan's territory was reduced to rubble. Monsters surrounded their camp, ready to pounce. Their leader, Cloudstar, had no choice but to abandon the territory. It happened on the night of the gathering, so Cloudstar brought his clan to Fourtrees. He told the other leaders what was happening, and asked if he could have a little of each of their territory. Redstar, the Thunderclan leader, said, "We have too many mouths to feed." Dawnstar, leader of Shadowclan, said, "The rats are taking over our territory!" Windclan and Riverclan both had food problems. So Skyclan was forced to leave, and they perished." So i have to rebuild Skyckan? Snowkit thought. As if she was able to read his thoughts, The Starclan cat said, "No, Another cat will do that in the future. Let me continue." Snowkit prepared to hear more. "When Skyclan left, a few cats left the group, because they had no trust in Cloudstar. You found their decendants." The story ended. The starry world started to fade away. "Go! Return to your body and build the lost clan!" The cat's voice was fading away. "Go!"
...
Snowkit woke up. His side hurt. "Snowkit? Snowkit!" Frost was standing over him. "Fear is asleep. let's tiptoe past her." Frost spoke in a hushed voice. "Comeon, Rain, Cricket." Each kit didn't dare breathe as they tiptoed past. They made it past Fear! They didn't feel safe, so they tiptoed all the way back to camp. "Moss! Wing!" Snowkit called in a whisper. "We snuck past fear and made it home!" Moss and Wing came out of their hole. "Snowkit! oh, Snowkit! I was so worried about you!" Moss said as she covered Snowkit with licks. Suddenly, Moss stopped. " I feel like you have been my son forever." Me too. Thought Snowkit.
"I love you mom."
AN: I could not resist writing this chapter! I really, really like the ending, he gets to say I love you to his mom.
Rain looked up at Fear. Fear looked down at Rain.
"Where is our mom?" Rain asked.
"Somewhere secret." Fear replied coldly. Rain stood up and looked Fear in the eye bravely. That Rain... does he even know who fear is? Snowkit wondered. "Do you somehow have mom?" Rain said coldly. "Rain. My friends will take care of her." Fear gave Rain the evil eye as she spoke. Rain sat down. He hid behind Frost, who was looking up at Fear. "Fear, our mommies will rescue us! Just you wait!" Frost yowled. Fear glared at Frost. Suddenly, Fear unsheathed her claws and attacked Frost. "Moss! Moss! Help us! Moss!" Snowkit suddenly yelled out without thinking. He saw claws flash at his face. Everything went black.
...
Snowkit woke up. He was in a shimmering, starry forest. A white cat padded up to Snowkit. "Who are you?" Snowkit asked. He could hear! "Do not be afraid." The starry cat told him. "You are brave. You are DESTINED to turn this pride into a great clan." "How?" Snowkit asked. " First, tell your friends about playing clan. Then, slowly turn it into the real thing." the Starclan cat replied, smiling.
"But why these cats?" Snowkit asked.
"Sit down. I will tell you a story." Said the cat.
The story began. "Long ago, there was 5 clans, Thunderclan, Shadowclan, Windclan, Riverclan, and Skyclan. They all lived in harmony for a while, and frighted only sometimes. Then, one day, Skyclan's territory was reduced to rubble. Monsters surrounded their camp, ready to pounce. Their leader, Cloudstar, had no choice but to abandon the territory. It happened on the night of the gathering, so Cloudstar brought his clan to Fourtrees. He told the other leaders what was happening, and asked if he could have a little of each of their territory. Redstar, the Thunderclan leader, said, "We have too many mouths to feed." Dawnstar, leader of Shadowclan, said, "The rats are taking over our territory!" Windclan and Riverclan both had food problems. So Skyclan was forced to leave, and they perished." So i have to rebuild Skyckan? Snowkit thought. As if she was able to read his thoughts, The Starclan cat said, "No, Another cat will do that in the future. Let me continue." Snowkit prepared to hear more. "When Skyclan left, a few cats left the group, because they had no trust in Cloudstar. You found their decendants." The story ended. The starry world started to fade away. "Go! Return to your body and build the lost clan!" The cat's voice was fading away. "Go!"
...
Snowkit woke up. His side hurt. "Snowkit? Snowkit!" Frost was standing over him. "Fear is asleep. let's tiptoe past her." Frost spoke in a hushed voice. "Comeon, Rain, Cricket." Each kit didn't dare breathe as they tiptoed past. They made it past Fear! They didn't feel safe, so they tiptoed all the way back to camp. "Moss! Wing!" Snowkit called in a whisper. "We snuck past fear and made it home!" Moss and Wing came out of their hole. "Snowkit! oh, Snowkit! I was so worried about you!" Moss said as she covered Snowkit with licks. Suddenly, Moss stopped. " I feel like you have been my son forever." Me too. Thought Snowkit.
"I love you mom."
AN: I could not resist writing this chapter! I really, really like the ending, he gets to say I love you to his mom.
Chapter 4: Kits and Kidnapping
Lightning looked at Moss. A old grey cat looked at moss. Well, EVERY cat looked at Moss. "I found him on the Monster Path, and he had no mom. I told him where we were going, and adopted him on the way." Moss explained. The grey cat looked at Moss. "Moss, you already have 2 kits, and Wing has three!" The grey cat shot back. "What would YOU do if you found a kitten with no mom, all alone, Dust?" asked Moss.
Dust had lost. Dust quietly disappeared down a hole in the ground. Does that go to a den? Do all the holes go to dens? Snowkit wondered. Lightning looked at Snowkit.
"What is your name?" Lightning asked.
"He's deaf." Moss said. "Dear, Put your paw on Lightning's throat and you'll hear him." Moss told Snowkit. Snowkit did as he was told, and he could hear Lightning as he repeated what he said.
"I'm Snowkit." Snowkit said. Three kits bounced out of a den. One was white with different colored eyes, one was pale blue, and one was golden-brown, like a cricket. A cat with wing-like patterns came out with them. Is that Wing? Snowkit wondered.
"Hi! I'm Frost." The white kit with different eyes said. " The blue kit is Rain, and the golden one is Cricket." Frost continued. "Our mom is over there. Her name is Wing. Are you gonna be a good playmate?"
Rain and Cricket came over. "H-h-hi. I'm Cricket." Cricket sure seems shy. Snowkit thought. Cricket looked thoughtfully at Snowkit. "Do you like to play?" She asked. Snowkit did not have time to respond, because Lightning bellowed, "Pride, the sun is setting. please go to your'e sleep-hole and wake to a new day."
Wing meowed, "This way." Moss followed Wing, and Snowkit followed Moss. Snowkit closed his eyes. What a day. He thought.
...
Snowkit woke up. there was no Moss around him, keeping him warm. He looked at Cricket, who was eyeing a Cream-and-brown figure. Oh no.. thought Snowkit as he looked up at the cat. It's FEAR.
AN: Sudden ending, right? Dust seems mean, the kits are overly friendly, and we haven't met Rain yet! What a day, what a day.
Lightning looked at Moss. A old grey cat looked at moss. Well, EVERY cat looked at Moss. "I found him on the Monster Path, and he had no mom. I told him where we were going, and adopted him on the way." Moss explained. The grey cat looked at Moss. "Moss, you already have 2 kits, and Wing has three!" The grey cat shot back. "What would YOU do if you found a kitten with no mom, all alone, Dust?" asked Moss.
Dust had lost. Dust quietly disappeared down a hole in the ground. Does that go to a den? Do all the holes go to dens? Snowkit wondered. Lightning looked at Snowkit.
"What is your name?" Lightning asked.
"He's deaf." Moss said. "Dear, Put your paw on Lightning's throat and you'll hear him." Moss told Snowkit. Snowkit did as he was told, and he could hear Lightning as he repeated what he said.
"I'm Snowkit." Snowkit said. Three kits bounced out of a den. One was white with different colored eyes, one was pale blue, and one was golden-brown, like a cricket. A cat with wing-like patterns came out with them. Is that Wing? Snowkit wondered.
"Hi! I'm Frost." The white kit with different eyes said. " The blue kit is Rain, and the golden one is Cricket." Frost continued. "Our mom is over there. Her name is Wing. Are you gonna be a good playmate?"
Rain and Cricket came over. "H-h-hi. I'm Cricket." Cricket sure seems shy. Snowkit thought. Cricket looked thoughtfully at Snowkit. "Do you like to play?" She asked. Snowkit did not have time to respond, because Lightning bellowed, "Pride, the sun is setting. please go to your'e sleep-hole and wake to a new day."
Wing meowed, "This way." Moss followed Wing, and Snowkit followed Moss. Snowkit closed his eyes. What a day. He thought.
...
Snowkit woke up. there was no Moss around him, keeping him warm. He looked at Cricket, who was eyeing a Cream-and-brown figure. Oh no.. thought Snowkit as he looked up at the cat. It's FEAR.
AN: Sudden ending, right? Dust seems mean, the kits are overly friendly, and we haven't met Rain yet! What a day, what a day.
Monday, April 1, 2013
Chapter 3: Moss the mysterous...
"That's a monster path, young one." Moss told Snowkit later. "You saw the monster. All they seem to do is carry twolegs in their bellies and never leave the path. They seem so simpleminded." Snowkit felt the earth shake beneath his tiny snow-white paws. "Snowkit! That's Fear! Get under this bush now!" Moss suddenly screamed. They slid under the bush just in time to see a brown cat with cream-colored stripes down it's back.
When the cat passed, Moss whispered, "She's Fear. She's a ruthless killer, so I advise you that you stay out of her way." Snowkit shivered at the thought of Fear killing him. "I'm afraid she'll kill my kits." Moss said, and Snowkit noticed her swelled belly for the first time. "She killed my mate, Shadow, and i'm afraid she'll kill me next." Snowkit thought about this. I just met Moss, and now she's telling me all about her life? Snowkit thought. Finally, Snowkit spoke. "How did she become like this?" Snowkit asked Moss. "No cat knows." Answered Moss. Snowkit shook with fright.
"Well, me and my friends have a small camp, should i show you it?" asked Moss.
"Okay" said Snowkit. Moss followed a small path until they came to a clearing. Several cats were sitting, apparently waiting for Moss. "Moss, I was so worried about you!" a yellow lion-like cat exclaimed.
"Lightning, I am fine! It's not like Fear is hunting me down." This cat- Lightning, must be Moss's new mate Snowkit thought. Lightning looked at Snowkit.
"Who are you, kit?" asked Lightning.
"I adopted him." Moss quickly exclaimed.
AN: What the what??? Anyway, it seems Snowkit has a new mom- Moss!
"That's a monster path, young one." Moss told Snowkit later. "You saw the monster. All they seem to do is carry twolegs in their bellies and never leave the path. They seem so simpleminded." Snowkit felt the earth shake beneath his tiny snow-white paws. "Snowkit! That's Fear! Get under this bush now!" Moss suddenly screamed. They slid under the bush just in time to see a brown cat with cream-colored stripes down it's back.
When the cat passed, Moss whispered, "She's Fear. She's a ruthless killer, so I advise you that you stay out of her way." Snowkit shivered at the thought of Fear killing him. "I'm afraid she'll kill my kits." Moss said, and Snowkit noticed her swelled belly for the first time. "She killed my mate, Shadow, and i'm afraid she'll kill me next." Snowkit thought about this. I just met Moss, and now she's telling me all about her life? Snowkit thought. Finally, Snowkit spoke. "How did she become like this?" Snowkit asked Moss. "No cat knows." Answered Moss. Snowkit shook with fright.
"Well, me and my friends have a small camp, should i show you it?" asked Moss.
"Okay" said Snowkit. Moss followed a small path until they came to a clearing. Several cats were sitting, apparently waiting for Moss. "Moss, I was so worried about you!" a yellow lion-like cat exclaimed.
"Lightning, I am fine! It's not like Fear is hunting me down." This cat- Lightning, must be Moss's new mate Snowkit thought. Lightning looked at Snowkit.
"Who are you, kit?" asked Lightning.
"I adopted him." Moss quickly exclaimed.
AN: What the what??? Anyway, it seems Snowkit has a new mom- Moss!
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