*cue sad violin*
Snoweagle turned around and walked away.
"Snoweagle?" Thunderbolt called (well knowing he probably did do hear, LOL) Snoweagle picked up the pace and ran twords the fabled mountain, tears in his eyes. lightning and Thunderbolt ran after him. When Snoweagle's strength finally gave out, she stopped short and collaped.
"What's wrong?" Thunderbolt asked.
"Nothing." Snoweagle repliied. he got up and started off. Highstones (or whatever it was can't remember) was close. "Ok, let's get going. Up the mountan."
"Uh. Okay. Lightning said. Lightning and Thunderbolt followed Snoweagle up the mountian.
In the cavern thingy...
"OKay, follow my voice. it's really dark in here." Snoweagle said as he continued on.
After a while, Thunerbolt gasped. "Wut?" asked Snoweagle.
"Look! A light!" Thunderbolt said.
"Oh, you're right!" Snoweagle gasped.
"Light?" Lightning asked. "Oh, now i see it." The trio raced twords the light and pawsed, gasping.
The cavern was lit up by a ghostly light, with a ball of starlight sitting in the middle. a hole above the metor made the moon's light shine apon it, causing the glow. Little bits of the metor lay scattered around. little dents shaped like paw prints dotted the floor of the cavern.
"Okay, now we press our noses against the stone." Snoweagle. As soon as hos nose came in contact, he felt drowsy. he sunk to the ground and fell asleep.
...
Snoweagle woke up in a misty forest, stars covering the milky sky. A brownish-grey cat stalked t words him. "Oh... you are that medicne cat." Snoweagle said.
"I belive my name is Yellowfang." Said the cat. another cat appeared behind her, smelling of starlight and things in the night.
"Oh, it's you."
Tuesday, December 31, 2013
Sunday, December 8, 2013
Chapter 25: Thunderclan.
Snoweagle, Thunderbolt and Lightning trugded on. Eventually they got to a barren landscape Snoweagle reconized. His mind flashed back to when he was a kit and he gasped.
"What's wrong?" asked Thunderbolt.
"This...this is Windclan Territory!" Snoweagle said happily. "My mom told me about it. He sniffed the air. "Shadow clan that way... Riverclan...Thunderclan!" He raced off quickly.
"Slow down!!!" said Lightning. Snoweagle ran all the way to The hollow. he saw the Ginjer cat that took pity on him leading the clan. The Burly tom kit looked proud, lead held high. His mom stepped out of the elder's den, looking frail, but smiling. I wonder... did mom move on? Did she forget about me? Have other kits? Snoweagle shook his head. Not possible. 'Firestar' noticed Snoweagle's head in a puddle so Snoweagle ducked it. Firestar gasped faintly and mumbled something. Snoweagle flinched inside his hideaway. He rose his head back up to watch.
The elder with one eye, One-Eye, approached Snoweagle's mom.
"Times like this, i miss my son." One-Eye said.
"Your son? Speckletail (Snowkit's Mom) said.
"Runningwind." One-eye said. "Mousefur sure does miss him, i bet.
"Mabye, she moved on." Speckletail said.
"you think.." One-eye whispered.
"I miss my son sometimes, but i know now he could not be a warrior with out his sense of hearing." Speckletail said.
Your'e wrong! Snoweagle thought. I'll be a warrior! I will!
AN: Rage!
"What's wrong?" asked Thunderbolt.
"This...this is Windclan Territory!" Snoweagle said happily. "My mom told me about it. He sniffed the air. "Shadow clan that way... Riverclan...Thunderclan!" He raced off quickly.
"Slow down!!!" said Lightning. Snoweagle ran all the way to The hollow. he saw the Ginjer cat that took pity on him leading the clan. The Burly tom kit looked proud, lead held high. His mom stepped out of the elder's den, looking frail, but smiling. I wonder... did mom move on? Did she forget about me? Have other kits? Snoweagle shook his head. Not possible. 'Firestar' noticed Snoweagle's head in a puddle so Snoweagle ducked it. Firestar gasped faintly and mumbled something. Snoweagle flinched inside his hideaway. He rose his head back up to watch.
The elder with one eye, One-Eye, approached Snoweagle's mom.
"Times like this, i miss my son." One-Eye said.
"Your son? Speckletail (Snowkit's Mom) said.
"Runningwind." One-eye said. "Mousefur sure does miss him, i bet.
"Mabye, she moved on." Speckletail said.
"you think.." One-eye whispered.
"I miss my son sometimes, but i know now he could not be a warrior with out his sense of hearing." Speckletail said.
Your'e wrong! Snoweagle thought. I'll be a warrior! I will!
AN: Rage!
Saturday, December 7, 2013
AN: Whew, I died for so long...
AN: Hello, and welcome back to Snowkit: After The Eagle! After a long death, I'm back. So, I'm going to pick back up the story tommrow. I lost interest in the story and went on a LONG trip. Shortly after, i had a lot of things to do for school and friends and stuff. I have a life outside of blogger. so, i'm back, and i hope that everyone sees this blog post eventually.
Signing off for the fist time in months,
~Pikachu/Bluefall.
P.S. Changing back to bluefall, because i miss her :'(
Signing off for the fist time in months,
~Pikachu/Bluefall.
P.S. Changing back to bluefall, because i miss her :'(
Sunday, July 28, 2013
Chapter 24: New Friend
Snoweagle walked over to Lightning. "We need to help this cat!" Snoweagle said.
"Your'e right." said Lightning.
"I'll get some water for him or her to drink and you stay with him/her and find food for it somehow." Snoweagle said.
"Good plan." said Lightning. Snowealge trotted off. He sniffed the air. I smell water... He looked to the left of a narrow street. I think it's this way. He trotted off for a long time. finally, he reached a long bridge. He looked down from the top. Ah! Now there's water! Now, that's a long way down. he thought. But i must, and i shall, and- "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!" Said Snoweagle as he fell off the bridge. SPLASHHHHH! he landed in the icy cold water. he swam to the surface. and paddled to some rocks. Great. I'm all wet. He thought as he slowly climbed out of the water. "BRRRRRb-BRRRRRRb"He said as he shook himself off. Ah, that's better. He thought. Now how will i carry this water? He thought. then i thought struck him. I can carry moss with water in it, right! But not bath water. He thought. Ehh, we'll take that cat here. He grabbed some moss, drenched it, and went back to Lightning.
...
"Ah! Snoweagle!" Lightning said as he appeared. "I see you have water for drinking..." He said.
"Yesfm." Said Snowealge.
"Give it to the cat, please." Lightning said.
"O-kayfm." Said Snoweagle. He gently dripped water into the cat's mouth. It licked its lips and opened it's eyes. It blinked blue eyes up at Snowealge.
"Hi." It said. "I-i guess you rescued me."
"Yes." Said Lightning. "And who are you?"
"Uh..." The cat said. "You first."
"I'm Lightning." Lightning said proudly. "That white cat over there is Snoweagle."
"Oh!" Said the cat. "Our names match. I'm Thunderbolt."
"Nice name." Said Snowealge.
"Thanks." Said Thunderbolt.
"Why did you need to leave?" Asked Snoweagle."
Why did i need to leave?" Said Thunderbolt. "I guess it's a long story."
"We have time." Said Lightning.
"Well, it started when...."
...
"Wh-WHAAAAAAAT?" Shouted Lightning.
"WOAH!" Said Snoweagle.
"You mean, you wanted to join other clans in the forest, but they always chased you off?" Said Lightning.
"A-and you heard there was a new clan so you rushed to go try to join it?" Said Snowealge.
"But the dog got in your way?!" Said Lighting. "And that's how you got hurt!"
"Yeah..." Said Thunderbolt nervously.
"Well, I think..." Started Snoweagle Then he whispered something in Lightning's ear.
"Hmm, I think so, too!" Said Lightning. "Thunderbolt, want to join our clan?"
"R-really?" Said Thunderbolt. "Yes! Thank you!"
"We are on a journey, so do you want to help out?" Asked Snowealge.
"Yes!" Said Thunderbolt.
AN: Ever so great-ful (XD) for the new cat, Mimi Faelin!
"Your'e right." said Lightning.
"I'll get some water for him or her to drink and you stay with him/her and find food for it somehow." Snoweagle said.
"Good plan." said Lightning. Snowealge trotted off. He sniffed the air. I smell water... He looked to the left of a narrow street. I think it's this way. He trotted off for a long time. finally, he reached a long bridge. He looked down from the top. Ah! Now there's water! Now, that's a long way down. he thought. But i must, and i shall, and- "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!" Said Snoweagle as he fell off the bridge. SPLASHHHHH! he landed in the icy cold water. he swam to the surface. and paddled to some rocks. Great. I'm all wet. He thought as he slowly climbed out of the water. "BRRRRRb-BRRRRRRb"He said as he shook himself off. Ah, that's better. He thought. Now how will i carry this water? He thought. then i thought struck him. I can carry moss with water in it, right! But not bath water. He thought. Ehh, we'll take that cat here. He grabbed some moss, drenched it, and went back to Lightning.
...
"Ah! Snoweagle!" Lightning said as he appeared. "I see you have water for drinking..." He said.
"Yesfm." Said Snowealge.
"Give it to the cat, please." Lightning said.
"O-kayfm." Said Snoweagle. He gently dripped water into the cat's mouth. It licked its lips and opened it's eyes. It blinked blue eyes up at Snowealge.
"Hi." It said. "I-i guess you rescued me."
"Yes." Said Lightning. "And who are you?"
"Uh..." The cat said. "You first."
"I'm Lightning." Lightning said proudly. "That white cat over there is Snoweagle."
"Oh!" Said the cat. "Our names match. I'm Thunderbolt."
"Nice name." Said Snowealge.
"Thanks." Said Thunderbolt.
"Why did you need to leave?" Asked Snoweagle."
Why did i need to leave?" Said Thunderbolt. "I guess it's a long story."
"We have time." Said Lightning.
"Well, it started when...."
...
"Wh-WHAAAAAAAT?" Shouted Lightning.
"WOAH!" Said Snoweagle.
"You mean, you wanted to join other clans in the forest, but they always chased you off?" Said Lightning.
"A-and you heard there was a new clan so you rushed to go try to join it?" Said Snowealge.
"But the dog got in your way?!" Said Lighting. "And that's how you got hurt!"
"Yeah..." Said Thunderbolt nervously.
"Well, I think..." Started Snoweagle Then he whispered something in Lightning's ear.
"Hmm, I think so, too!" Said Lightning. "Thunderbolt, want to join our clan?"
"R-really?" Said Thunderbolt. "Yes! Thank you!"
"We are on a journey, so do you want to help out?" Asked Snowealge.
"Yes!" Said Thunderbolt.
AN: Ever so great-ful (XD) for the new cat, Mimi Faelin!
Thursday, July 25, 2013
Chapter 23: A cat in need
AN: Sorry to Greatshot, but lack of commenting has caused Flamingpelt to die, But you may produce a new cat later on.
Snoweagle and Lightning had already gone through the feield and were approaching a strange mass of stone hills.
"URGH!" Said Lightning, who then scowled. "What is that horrible smell?" He asked.
"I think that's...Twolegplace." Snoweagle told him.
"What's a Twoleg?" Asked Lightning.
"Uh." Said Snoweagle. "I've never seen one before." He said. "But I had heard stories about them."
"What kinds of stories?" Lightning asked.
"I heard they Had no fur and walked on two legs! TWO!" Snoweagle said.
"Two legs?" How is that possible?" Lightning asked.
"I don't know." Snoweagle said. "I also know they take bloodthirsty animals called dogs with them a lot. I had this cat in my clan who got attacked by a dog around the time the eagle got me."
"What happenend to that cat?" Asked Lightning.
"I... don't really know." Snoweagle said gloomily. "I think she's dead."
"Oh," Said Lightning.
All was quiet execpt for the barking of dogs and the quiet meowing of starving cats. As they traveled through the maze of stone, Snoweagle noticed a cat, huddled in a corner.
"Lightning!" Said Snoweagle.
"Yes?" Asked Lightning.
"I think that cat needs help!" Snoweagle shouted. He ran over to the helpless cat. "Are you okay?" He asked.
"N-neeed... f-f-food..." Said the starving cat. It was lying there, half awake. It's pelt was so dirty, you could not tell what it's fur color was. It looked like a trash bag.
"Don't worry! I'll find you food!" Wherever that is. Snoweagle shouted. He scratched around the area, looking for at least a crumb. Finally, he found a good-smelling triangle peice of bread. It had a bite in it, but it still looked yummy. He fed it to the cat. Slowly, slowly, the cat ate the food. Then it stood up and started to walk away. "Where are you going?" Asked Snoweagle.
"I have to go! Now!" Said the cat. It took a step forward and cringed.
"Your'e not okay! you must stay here!" Snoweagle protested.
"No....I have to go..." Said the cat. It then collapsed.
Snoweagle and Lightning had already gone through the feield and were approaching a strange mass of stone hills.
"URGH!" Said Lightning, who then scowled. "What is that horrible smell?" He asked.
"I think that's...Twolegplace." Snoweagle told him.
"What's a Twoleg?" Asked Lightning.
"Uh." Said Snoweagle. "I've never seen one before." He said. "But I had heard stories about them."
"What kinds of stories?" Lightning asked.
"I heard they Had no fur and walked on two legs! TWO!" Snoweagle said.
"Two legs?" How is that possible?" Lightning asked.
"I don't know." Snoweagle said. "I also know they take bloodthirsty animals called dogs with them a lot. I had this cat in my clan who got attacked by a dog around the time the eagle got me."
"What happenend to that cat?" Asked Lightning.
"I... don't really know." Snoweagle said gloomily. "I think she's dead."
"Oh," Said Lightning.
All was quiet execpt for the barking of dogs and the quiet meowing of starving cats. As they traveled through the maze of stone, Snoweagle noticed a cat, huddled in a corner.
"Lightning!" Said Snoweagle.
"Yes?" Asked Lightning.
"I think that cat needs help!" Snoweagle shouted. He ran over to the helpless cat. "Are you okay?" He asked.
"N-neeed... f-f-food..." Said the starving cat. It was lying there, half awake. It's pelt was so dirty, you could not tell what it's fur color was. It looked like a trash bag.
"Don't worry! I'll find you food!" Wherever that is. Snoweagle shouted. He scratched around the area, looking for at least a crumb. Finally, he found a good-smelling triangle peice of bread. It had a bite in it, but it still looked yummy. He fed it to the cat. Slowly, slowly, the cat ate the food. Then it stood up and started to walk away. "Where are you going?" Asked Snoweagle.
"I have to go! Now!" Said the cat. It took a step forward and cringed.
"Your'e not okay! you must stay here!" Snoweagle protested.
"No....I have to go..." Said the cat. It then collapsed.
Sunday, July 21, 2013
Chapter 22: A deputy
Snoweagle trotted for the Tumblestones, the new place where clan meetings were held. He looked up to the top. Lightining stood proud. Snoweagle caught his eye and beconed him to come up with him.
"What do you want?" Snoweagle asked.
"How do you preform the cerymony?" Lighting asked.
"Ok. To get all the ctas attention you say, 'Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here for a clan meeting.' " Snoweagle told him quickly.
"How do you appoint a new deputy?" Lightning asked.
"You start by saying, I say these words before StarClan, so that the spirits of our warrior ancestors may hear and approve of my choice." Snoweagle said. "Then, you say, The new deputy of whatever clan is a warrior's name."
"Ok. Got it." Lightning said. As Snoweagle hopped to the bottom of the Tumblestones, he heard Lightning's voice.
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Sorry something went weird with the font and i can't fix it!
"What do you want?" Snoweagle asked.
"How do you preform the cerymony?" Lighting asked.
"Ok. To get all the ctas attention you say, 'Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here for a clan meeting.' " Snoweagle told him quickly.
"How do you appoint a new deputy?" Lightning asked.
"You start by saying, I say these words before StarClan, so that the spirits of our warrior ancestors may hear and approve of my choice." Snoweagle said. "Then, you say, The new deputy of whatever clan is a warrior's name."
"Ok. Got it." Lightning said. As Snoweagle hopped to the bottom of the Tumblestones, he heard Lightning's voice.
"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here beaneath the Tumblesones for a clan meeting!" Ligtning yowled. Moss, followed by Lightkit came out of the medicene den, followed by Slashkit and Echofeather.Other cats followed, until every cat in the clan was assembled under the stones."I say these words before Starclan, so that the sprits of our warrior ancestors may hear and approve of my choice."Whispers echoed from the clan."It's Snoweagle.""Yeah, defiantly Snoweagle.""Who could be better?"Snoweagle Stared up at Lightning. Lightning opened his mouth to speak."The new deputy will be..."Frostflight caught her breath."Raincloud."Raincloud looked shocked. He stared at Lightning."M-me?" Raincloud asked, with disbelief."Yes, you."Lightning said. "I belive you are perfect for the job.""Raincloud! Raincloud!" Cricketpaw chanted."Raincloud!"Shouted Lightkit."Raincloud!"Shouted Wing."Raincloud!" Shouted Snoweagle.Raincloud blushed. "Th-thank you." He said."There is one last thing i have to tell you before this meeting comes to a end." Lightning said.All the cats turned to attention. "me and Snoweagle are going on a journey to the moonstone to get my nine lives. He knows where it is, so that is why he is coming along." Lightning told them.No... I don't know there it is. But i think it's in a mountain beyond Windclan territory?As all the cats left, Lightning walked over to Raincloud."while i'm gone, your'e in charge." Lightning told Raincloud."Okay." Raincloud replied. "I'll do my best." Lightning turned to Snoweagle. "It's time to go." he said.
Warning to Greatshot, Perry4464, and Amparos92, your cats will die if you do not comment soon.Sorry something went weird with the font and i can't fix it!
Friday, July 19, 2013
Chapter 21: Whynaut?
Snoweagle strolled into Lightning's den. He was there. Here goes nothing. Snoweagle thought.
"Uh...Lightning?" Snoweagle asked.
"Yes..?" Lightning answered.
"I wanted to talk to you about this clan." Snoweagle said. "And about you."
"What do you want?" Lightning asked.
"Well...This can't be a real clan until you appoint a deputy and revive your nine lives." Snoweagle told him.
"Well...." Lightning started nervously. "I suppose i could appoint a deputy. Where do you get nine lives?" He asked.
"From a place called the moon stone." Snoweagle told him. Snoweagle felt a bead of sweat drop down. he better not ask how long the journey will take...
"How far away is the moonstone?" Lightning asked. Uh-oh. thought Snoweagle. a second bead dripped from his face.
"Just a moment please..." Snoweagle said nervously. "I won't be long.." Snoweagle raced out for Lightning's den and confronted Wing. "Whatwouldyoudoifyouhadtotellsomebody-" He started.
"Woah woah woah WOAH!" Said Wing. "Start over-and say what you were meaning to... SLOWLY."
Snoweagle sighed, turned around, and took a deep breath. He turned around.
"What would you-"Snoweagle was cut off by Lightning.
"Snoweagle." Lightning called. "You said you wouldn't be long."
"Sorry." Said Snoweagle.
"Shall we be continuing sometime today?" Lightning said, a hint of anger in his voice.
Snoweagle turned to Wing. "Sorry." Snoweagle trotted back to Lightinng's den.
"Where were we?" Asked Lightning.
"Ah... To get to the moonstone, you have to travel about a moon." Snoweagle said.
"Why not?" said Lighting. "Nine lives are worth a Moon's travel, arn't they?" He said. Snoweagle was taked be surprise. Wh-WHAAAAAAAAT? The thought. "We should head off soon, shouldn't we?" Lightning said.
"Don't forget to app-" Snoweagle was cut off yet again.
"Don't worry, i'll appoint a deputy." Lightning reassured.
AN: Book reference, anyone?
"Uh...Lightning?" Snoweagle asked.
"Yes..?" Lightning answered.
"I wanted to talk to you about this clan." Snoweagle said. "And about you."
"What do you want?" Lightning asked.
"Well...This can't be a real clan until you appoint a deputy and revive your nine lives." Snoweagle told him.
"Well...." Lightning started nervously. "I suppose i could appoint a deputy. Where do you get nine lives?" He asked.
"From a place called the moon stone." Snoweagle told him. Snoweagle felt a bead of sweat drop down. he better not ask how long the journey will take...
"How far away is the moonstone?" Lightning asked. Uh-oh. thought Snoweagle. a second bead dripped from his face.
"Just a moment please..." Snoweagle said nervously. "I won't be long.." Snoweagle raced out for Lightning's den and confronted Wing. "Whatwouldyoudoifyouhadtotellsomebody-" He started.
"Woah woah woah WOAH!" Said Wing. "Start over-and say what you were meaning to... SLOWLY."
Snoweagle sighed, turned around, and took a deep breath. He turned around.
"What would you-"Snoweagle was cut off by Lightning.
"Snoweagle." Lightning called. "You said you wouldn't be long."
"Sorry." Said Snoweagle.
"Shall we be continuing sometime today?" Lightning said, a hint of anger in his voice.
Snoweagle turned to Wing. "Sorry." Snoweagle trotted back to Lightinng's den.
"Where were we?" Asked Lightning.
"Ah... To get to the moonstone, you have to travel about a moon." Snoweagle said.
"Why not?" said Lighting. "Nine lives are worth a Moon's travel, arn't they?" He said. Snoweagle was taked be surprise. Wh-WHAAAAAAAAT? The thought. "We should head off soon, shouldn't we?" Lightning said.
"Don't forget to app-" Snoweagle was cut off yet again.
"Don't worry, i'll appoint a deputy." Lightning reassured.
AN: Book reference, anyone?
Friday, July 12, 2013
Chapter 20: A name for the kit
Snoweagle looked on silently as the kit whimpered. What do i do? I'm not a she-cat! He wondered. And most certainly not a mother. He gently picked up the kit with his teeth and tiptoed through the brambles. That wound does NOT look good. He thought, looking at the slash mark. Suddenly, he wondered where the kit was from. He took a good sniff and nearly dropped the kit to gasp. Fear? But Fear was dead. He decided to dismiss that and take the kit to camp.
...
"How will we feed this kit?" Moss asked Snoweagle. "Nobody here can nurse the poor thing. And it can't eat fresh kill yet.."
"What will happen to it?" Asked Lightkit, lifting her head. "Will it die?"
"Of course not." Moss replied. "Mabye..." Moss paused. "oh, I don't know..." Snoweagle looked at the cat's claw mark.
"Will the scratch heal?" Snoweagle asked.
"No. it's too far gone to heal now." Moss said, looking at her paws. "The most i can do is get the infection out of it."
"Can't we go looking for a mom?" Asked Lightkit. "Our clan can't feed it."
"Well, we certainly can't feed it without milk." Moss told her. Lightkit sighed.
"Moss?" Lightkit asked. "Can i ask you something?"
"Yes?" Replied Moss. "What is it?"
Lightkit took a deep breath and braced herself for the answer. "Will i ever be a apprentice?" She asked, then coughed.
Moss looked at her. "Maybe." Moss sighed. She looked at the kit. "I can say the same for this fellow. I wonder who it's mom is." Snoweagle Walked over to Lightkit."Do you want to go for a walk in the woods?" he asked.
Lightkit sighed. "No." she said. "I want to think of a name for this kit." She tilted her head to one side. "I think Slashkit fits. It should be part of our clan." She said.
Snoweagle rembered something. "This is not a real clan-at the moment." He told Lightkit. "Lightning needs to earn his 9 lives."
"Why not talk to him about that?" Lightkit said.
"You know..." Snoweagle started. "That's not a bad idea. I'll go talk to him right now."
AN: I wonder what is next!
...
"How will we feed this kit?" Moss asked Snoweagle. "Nobody here can nurse the poor thing. And it can't eat fresh kill yet.."
"What will happen to it?" Asked Lightkit, lifting her head. "Will it die?"
"Of course not." Moss replied. "Mabye..." Moss paused. "oh, I don't know..." Snoweagle looked at the cat's claw mark.
"Will the scratch heal?" Snoweagle asked.
"No. it's too far gone to heal now." Moss said, looking at her paws. "The most i can do is get the infection out of it."
"Can't we go looking for a mom?" Asked Lightkit. "Our clan can't feed it."
"Well, we certainly can't feed it without milk." Moss told her. Lightkit sighed.
"Moss?" Lightkit asked. "Can i ask you something?"
"Yes?" Replied Moss. "What is it?"
Lightkit took a deep breath and braced herself for the answer. "Will i ever be a apprentice?" She asked, then coughed.
Moss looked at her. "Maybe." Moss sighed. She looked at the kit. "I can say the same for this fellow. I wonder who it's mom is." Snoweagle Walked over to Lightkit."Do you want to go for a walk in the woods?" he asked.
Lightkit sighed. "No." she said. "I want to think of a name for this kit." She tilted her head to one side. "I think Slashkit fits. It should be part of our clan." She said.
Snoweagle rembered something. "This is not a real clan-at the moment." He told Lightkit. "Lightning needs to earn his 9 lives."
"Why not talk to him about that?" Lightkit said.
"You know..." Snoweagle started. "That's not a bad idea. I'll go talk to him right now."
AN: I wonder what is next!
Wednesday, July 10, 2013
Chapter 19: Kit in the woods
Snoweagle was out for another patrol. As he weaved through the branches, he turned to his patrol.
"We should split up." He meowed.
Wing stared Snoweagle up and down. "Really?" She asked. "That is really dangerous, with Ruin running around her-" Wing cut off, interupted.
"No, it's safe because we would be more.... hidden. Harder to find." Snoweagle told Wing.
" I for one, agree with Snoweagle." Piped up Snoweagle's apprentice, Nightpaw. Suddenly, Nightpaw laughed. " I sound so fancy!" He giggled.
"Like a kittypet." Snoweagle said. " O.K, do we all agree? Should we split up?" He asked.
" Yep!" Said Nightpaw.
" Ok. If we have to..." Wing sighed, then turned, and bounded over a brable bush, to quickly disapear. Nightpaw went north, Stipping. " La la la la la..." Nightpaw said as his voice faded away. Nightpaw is crazy. Thought Snoweagle as he headed south. After a while, he saw a lump in a bush. Mouse! He thought.
He dropped into the Hunter's crouch and slinked closer and closer to the animal. Just before the leap, Snoweagle gasped. He stopped hunting the poor creature. It was a little kit. A Kit! Thought Snoweagle. Was it left here to die? It looks Newborn. He gently nosed the kit and found it's heart beating softly. It's Alive! Then he noticed something. A long slash on the kit's head. There was one thing for certain...
No doubt this kit needs help!
AN: soory about the Chapter lack. I'm programming ^-^ Sorry about the shortness, i'll make it up. I promise.
"We should split up." He meowed.
Wing stared Snoweagle up and down. "Really?" She asked. "That is really dangerous, with Ruin running around her-" Wing cut off, interupted.
"No, it's safe because we would be more.... hidden. Harder to find." Snoweagle told Wing.
" I for one, agree with Snoweagle." Piped up Snoweagle's apprentice, Nightpaw. Suddenly, Nightpaw laughed. " I sound so fancy!" He giggled.
"Like a kittypet." Snoweagle said. " O.K, do we all agree? Should we split up?" He asked.
" Yep!" Said Nightpaw.
" Ok. If we have to..." Wing sighed, then turned, and bounded over a brable bush, to quickly disapear. Nightpaw went north, Stipping. " La la la la la..." Nightpaw said as his voice faded away. Nightpaw is crazy. Thought Snoweagle as he headed south. After a while, he saw a lump in a bush. Mouse! He thought.
He dropped into the Hunter's crouch and slinked closer and closer to the animal. Just before the leap, Snoweagle gasped. He stopped hunting the poor creature. It was a little kit. A Kit! Thought Snoweagle. Was it left here to die? It looks Newborn. He gently nosed the kit and found it's heart beating softly. It's Alive! Then he noticed something. A long slash on the kit's head. There was one thing for certain...
No doubt this kit needs help!
AN: soory about the Chapter lack. I'm programming ^-^ Sorry about the shortness, i'll make it up. I promise.
Saturday, June 22, 2013
Chapter 18 (try #2): AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Snoweagle walked through the dark part of the forest and approached the scent markers. He turned to see Nightpaw running after him. Nightpaw had become his apprentice over the past moon. But Lightkit remained Lightkit. It was a danger for her to be a apprentice, because of her spasms. She had one for a cat named Greypool, Deadfoot, Bluestar, Gorsepaw...
Snoweagle shook his head to clear his thoughts. What next? Nightpaw trotted slightly behind Snoweagle, then raced ahead. They approached the border carefully. A patrol on the other side appeared. In the patrol was Flamingpelt, Ruin, and Hate.
"Oh, i see your favorites again, Ruin." Nightpaw sneered.
"Oh, i see the useless kit with the deaf warrior." Hate sneered back. Nightpaw gaped, shocked.
"sensitive." Riun noted. His face broke into a smile. "Good."
"Don't." Nightpaw said fiercely.
All of a sudden, Hate lashed out at Nightpaw. "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" Screeched Nightpaw. Shivering, he backed away. He eyed the patrol for a few moments, then fled into the bushes. Snoweagle reluctantly followed him. AAAAugh. He thought.
AN: y u afraid? Oh yeah. for reasons. Yes! i made it through!
Snoweagle shook his head to clear his thoughts. What next? Nightpaw trotted slightly behind Snoweagle, then raced ahead. They approached the border carefully. A patrol on the other side appeared. In the patrol was Flamingpelt, Ruin, and Hate.
"Oh, i see your favorites again, Ruin." Nightpaw sneered.
"Oh, i see the useless kit with the deaf warrior." Hate sneered back. Nightpaw gaped, shocked.
"sensitive." Riun noted. His face broke into a smile. "Good."
"Don't." Nightpaw said fiercely.
All of a sudden, Hate lashed out at Nightpaw. "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" Screeched Nightpaw. Shivering, he backed away. He eyed the patrol for a few moments, then fled into the bushes. Snoweagle reluctantly followed him. AAAAugh. He thought.
AN: y u afraid? Oh yeah. for reasons. Yes! i made it through!
Wednesday, June 19, 2013
Chapter 18: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Snoweagle walked through the dark part of the forest and approached the scent markers. He turned to see Nightpaw running after him. Nightpaw had become his apprentice over the past moon. But Lightkit remained Lightkit. It was a danger for her to be a apprentice, because of her spasms. She had one for a cat named Greypool, Deadfoot, Bluestar, Gorsepaw...
Snoweagle shook his head to clear his thoughts. Who next? Nightpaw ran ahead to the border.
"Hurry up!" Nightpaw called. But of course Snowagle did not hear him. He was deaf.
"Hey!" said Snoweagle. "I read the word WAS!"
The author sighed. "Then it is is."
"NOOOO Now i'm deaf again?!" said Snoweagle.
"What?" called Nightpaw.
"Lines." said the Author.
"Oh yeah!!!" Replied Nightpaw. "Snoweagle! Hurry up- or come- AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"
"What now?" sighed the author.
"I forgot my lines" said Nightpaw, sadly.
"I think we should try this again." said Snoweagle. Ruin walked in with a fresh cup of cofee.
"What's going on?" Ruin asked.
"COFEEEEEEE!" yelled Nightpaw.
"I should not have brought this while we were doing this." said Ruin, regretably. "And i messed up my lines." Ruin facepalmed himself.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"
yelled the Author. "CUT!"
AN: I was left alone for a while and i had no story ideas, and i thought, "This is still good" so i decided to plublish it. BAD ME BAD ME! *Hits self with hammer* ow
Snoweagle shook his head to clear his thoughts. Who next? Nightpaw ran ahead to the border.
"Hurry up!" Nightpaw called. But of course Snowagle did not hear him. He was deaf.
"Hey!" said Snoweagle. "I read the word WAS!"
The author sighed. "Then it is is."
"NOOOO Now i'm deaf again?!" said Snoweagle.
"What?" called Nightpaw.
"Lines." said the Author.
"Oh yeah!!!" Replied Nightpaw. "Snoweagle! Hurry up- or come- AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"
"What now?" sighed the author.
"I forgot my lines" said Nightpaw, sadly.
"I think we should try this again." said Snoweagle. Ruin walked in with a fresh cup of cofee.
"What's going on?" Ruin asked.
"COFEEEEEEE!" yelled Nightpaw.
"I should not have brought this while we were doing this." said Ruin, regretably. "And i messed up my lines." Ruin facepalmed himself.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"
yelled the Author. "CUT!"
AN: I was left alone for a while and i had no story ideas, and i thought, "This is still good" so i decided to plublish it. BAD ME BAD ME! *Hits self with hammer* ow
Friday, June 7, 2013
Chapter 17: Love
Snoweagle slashed at Ruins sides, but he dodged. Ruin turned around and landed a hard blow on Snoweagle's head. Then, Ruin pinned him down. Ruin's weight was too much, so all Snoweagle could do was struggle under Ruin. Suddenly, he saw a flash of brown. Cricketpaw was slashing at Ruin's back. Snoweagle took this chance to swipe at Ruin's belly, but missed. He was still a little Dizzy.
The bushes rustled as re-enforcements rushed in. Snoweagle could pick out Flamingpelt among them. Back already? Snoweagle thought. He saw Flamingpelt rush right by him. No...no! Snoweagle thought. Flamingpelt was picking his way across the battlefield, rushing at Lightkit.
"AHHHHH! Stop! Stop!" Screamed Lightkit was loud as she could. Snoweagle swiped at Ruin's belly, landing a blow, then left Cricketpaw to fight Ruin. He had to save Lightkit. After all, Lightkit was his step-sibling. Snoweagle yanked Flamingpelt's tail and then jumped on his back.
"Lightkit! RUUUUUUUUUN!" Yelled Snoweagle as he scratched Flamingpelt's back. Flamingpelt rushed off... only to jump ON Lightning and squash him. Snoweagle spotted Frostflight struggling under a goon. Snoweagle swiped at the goon, then sent it fleeing into the bushes.
"Thanks." said Frostflight.
"Your'e welcome." replied Snoweagle. He could feel himself blushing.
"What do you think happened to Fear?" asked Frostflight.
"I think they may have fought," said Snoweagle. "Look at theses cats. I think they must fight every day."
"Yeah," Said Frostflight. Snoweagle looked around. The enemies were fleeing into the bushes. He picked out Ruin's pelt, and then Hate's. Ruin screamed something surprisingly inaudible, then rushed out of camp. Finally, the battle had stopped. "Err...I'm going to go see how Lightkit is doing." said Frostflight.
Snoweagle looked after her. I have special feelings for her. Snoweagle thought. Then he realized something. Am I in LOVE?
AN: First comes love, then comes.. um... marriage, then comes the baby in the... um... Moss!
The bushes rustled as re-enforcements rushed in. Snoweagle could pick out Flamingpelt among them. Back already? Snoweagle thought. He saw Flamingpelt rush right by him. No...no! Snoweagle thought. Flamingpelt was picking his way across the battlefield, rushing at Lightkit.
"AHHHHH! Stop! Stop!" Screamed Lightkit was loud as she could. Snoweagle swiped at Ruin's belly, landing a blow, then left Cricketpaw to fight Ruin. He had to save Lightkit. After all, Lightkit was his step-sibling. Snoweagle yanked Flamingpelt's tail and then jumped on his back.
"Lightkit! RUUUUUUUUUN!" Yelled Snoweagle as he scratched Flamingpelt's back. Flamingpelt rushed off... only to jump ON Lightning and squash him. Snoweagle spotted Frostflight struggling under a goon. Snoweagle swiped at the goon, then sent it fleeing into the bushes.
"Thanks." said Frostflight.
"Your'e welcome." replied Snoweagle. He could feel himself blushing.
"What do you think happened to Fear?" asked Frostflight.
"I think they may have fought," said Snoweagle. "Look at theses cats. I think they must fight every day."
"Yeah," Said Frostflight. Snoweagle looked around. The enemies were fleeing into the bushes. He picked out Ruin's pelt, and then Hate's. Ruin screamed something surprisingly inaudible, then rushed out of camp. Finally, the battle had stopped. "Err...I'm going to go see how Lightkit is doing." said Frostflight.
Snoweagle looked after her. I have special feelings for her. Snoweagle thought. Then he realized something. Am I in LOVE?
AN: First comes love, then comes.. um... marriage, then comes the baby in the... um... Moss!
Thursday, June 6, 2013
Chapter 16: Battle and Message
Snoweagle was thinking about Lightkit. Again, she recovered, but was noticably weaker. Suddenly, Lightkit tumbled and did not get up.
"Greypool..." She whispered. Snoweagle expected her eyes to close, but they were wide open.
"AAAAUUGH!" Lightkit screamed. Then was the time her eyes closed.
"What.... " Said Snoweagle. "What...." Suddenly, Moss rushed out of her den.
"Echofeather!" Moss screamed. Echofeather appeared suddenly, carrying some herbs. Then she looked at Lightkit. Echofeather glanced at Moss, then at something lurking in the bushes. She started to say something, but one of Fear's goons tore out.
"You-" said Moss. "DID YOU DO THIS?!?!" She screamed. "LOOK what you have DONE!"
"QUIET," Said the goon. Everyone present froze in terror. Raincloud, Cricketpaw, and Frostflight came back from the hunting patrol. They dropped their prey and ran over, glaring. "I come with a message," the goon parked. "I am the new leader of Fear's Tribe."
"Wh.....WHAAAAAAAATTT?" Everybody gasped. Wing came out of her den. Suddenly, she saw the branches rustle. And out comes Flamingpelt and another goon.
"You have met Flamingpelt," said the new leader goon. Moss took a step forward. "This other one is Hate." Hate, on the leader goon's right side, had a pelt as dark as night and red, blazing eyes.
"We will begin this 'talk' shortly." said Flamingpelt as she looked over Wing. Some goons were dragging Lightning out of this den. Hate sneered. Raincloud took a step forward.
" I am Ruin." said the leader goon.
" I suppose you have a VERY good reason for DRAGGING me out here." said Lightning, glaring at each enemy. The goons that dragged Lightning went behind Flamingpelt and Hate. What is going on? thought Snoweagle.
" To make sure that you don't try to get answers," said Ruin. "I..will...give...you...THIS!" Ruin lunged at Lightning. A battle had begun. Snoweagle ran at Flamingpelt and began tearing at his fur with his claws. Flamingpelt slashed at Snoweagle's claws and Snoweagle let go. Flamingpelt lunged at Snoweagle's neck, but missed.
"Take this! And that!" Snoweagle yowled as he swiped at Flamingpelt. "And some of these!" Snoweagle yelled as he tore at Flamingpelt's legs. but Flamingpelt dodged, and landed a long slice across Snoweagle's back. Snoweagle became enraged. Traitor! he thought was he sent Flamingpelt into the woods.
"I'll get you! You just wait!" Yowled Flamingpelt as he disappeared into the woods. He looked over at Lightning, who was struggling under Ruin. Snoweagle slashed at Ruins back. Ruin turned around and slashed at Snoweagle's ear. Snoweagle drew up his claws to slash at Ruin's nose, but Ruin pinned Snoweagle down. What a weight! Snoweagle thought.
"This ends HERE, kittypet." Ruin sneered. Kittypet... Kittypet... Snoweagle remembered Fireheart, one of Thunderclan's greatest. He was such a fighter, even though he used to be a kittypet. Fireheart did not give up, and neither should he!
"I'm no kittypet," whispered Snoweagle. "I'm a WARRIOR!"
AN: Bum bum buuuuuuummmm!
"Greypool..." She whispered. Snoweagle expected her eyes to close, but they were wide open.
"AAAAUUGH!" Lightkit screamed. Then was the time her eyes closed.
"What.... " Said Snoweagle. "What...." Suddenly, Moss rushed out of her den.
"Echofeather!" Moss screamed. Echofeather appeared suddenly, carrying some herbs. Then she looked at Lightkit. Echofeather glanced at Moss, then at something lurking in the bushes. She started to say something, but one of Fear's goons tore out.
"You-" said Moss. "DID YOU DO THIS?!?!" She screamed. "LOOK what you have DONE!"
"QUIET," Said the goon. Everyone present froze in terror. Raincloud, Cricketpaw, and Frostflight came back from the hunting patrol. They dropped their prey and ran over, glaring. "I come with a message," the goon parked. "I am the new leader of Fear's Tribe."
"Wh.....WHAAAAAAAATTT?" Everybody gasped. Wing came out of her den. Suddenly, she saw the branches rustle. And out comes Flamingpelt and another goon.
"You have met Flamingpelt," said the new leader goon. Moss took a step forward. "This other one is Hate." Hate, on the leader goon's right side, had a pelt as dark as night and red, blazing eyes.
"We will begin this 'talk' shortly." said Flamingpelt as she looked over Wing. Some goons were dragging Lightning out of this den. Hate sneered. Raincloud took a step forward.
" I am Ruin." said the leader goon.
" I suppose you have a VERY good reason for DRAGGING me out here." said Lightning, glaring at each enemy. The goons that dragged Lightning went behind Flamingpelt and Hate. What is going on? thought Snoweagle.
" To make sure that you don't try to get answers," said Ruin. "I..will...give...you...THIS!" Ruin lunged at Lightning. A battle had begun. Snoweagle ran at Flamingpelt and began tearing at his fur with his claws. Flamingpelt slashed at Snoweagle's claws and Snoweagle let go. Flamingpelt lunged at Snoweagle's neck, but missed.
"Take this! And that!" Snoweagle yowled as he swiped at Flamingpelt. "And some of these!" Snoweagle yelled as he tore at Flamingpelt's legs. but Flamingpelt dodged, and landed a long slice across Snoweagle's back. Snoweagle became enraged. Traitor! he thought was he sent Flamingpelt into the woods.
"I'll get you! You just wait!" Yowled Flamingpelt as he disappeared into the woods. He looked over at Lightning, who was struggling under Ruin. Snoweagle slashed at Ruins back. Ruin turned around and slashed at Snoweagle's ear. Snoweagle drew up his claws to slash at Ruin's nose, but Ruin pinned Snoweagle down. What a weight! Snoweagle thought.
"This ends HERE, kittypet." Ruin sneered. Kittypet... Kittypet... Snoweagle remembered Fireheart, one of Thunderclan's greatest. He was such a fighter, even though he used to be a kittypet. Fireheart did not give up, and neither should he!
"I'm no kittypet," whispered Snoweagle. "I'm a WARRIOR!"
AN: Bum bum buuuuuuummmm!
Sunday, June 2, 2013
Chapter (I forgot): Echo
Snowpaw danced like a manicac. He had completed his warrior training! He rushed off, all the way to the field where he could scream his praise to Starclan.
"WOOOOOO-HOOOOOOO!" Snowpaw screamed. "IM GOING TO BE A WARRIOR!!!" Snowpaw screamed louder. "THUNDERCLAN DOUBTED ME, SUCKS FOR THEM!"
"Keep it down!" Yelled a voice. Snowpaw froze and blushed.
"Who are-err- where are you?" Snowpaw asked into the abyss of grass. He knew where she was, because the white Starclan cat and Sorrelkit had given him a gift of feeling sound waves a couple of nights ago.
"The name's Echo." Replied the voice. Snowpaw found Echo. A light gray she-cat with a white chest and paws was lying in a nest of grass. She also had two jay feathers behind her ear.
"I claimed this as MY territory." Echo hissed. She had used the element of surprise. Then Echo pounced. Snowpaw looked at her visible ribs. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Is she going to eat me??? Snowkit thought. Claws clashed as each blow was scored- only to give up.
"I-i give up." Echo panted only a short while after. Snowpaw could tell she hadn't eaten in a while. "I'm not cut out for fighting, anyway."
"Errr... I have some food at errr... my camp. you wanna come?" Snowpaw wasked.
"WOULD I? OF COURSE I WOULD!" Echo exclaimed. And off they went.
...
Snoweagle, Frostflight, Raincloud ( I know), and Cricketpaw watched below a pile of stones, now called the Stonepile. Echo was about to become a medicne cat, to take Moss's place. After the ceremony, Snoweagle walked over to Echo, Now named Echofeather.
" You got what you wanted," Snoweagle said. Echofeather turned around, shocked. "You are one of us." Snoweagle told her.
"So I did." Echofeather scowled and stalked away to her new den. Snoweagle looked just in time to see Moss moving her kits to the Nursery.
"Horray!" Nightkit yelled.
"Hooray!" Lightkit tried to yell. Even though Moss nursed her back to health, Lightkit was still a little weak. Suddenly, Lightkit staggered and fell. coughing, she looked up at the clear blue sky.
"Stonefur....." Lightkit gasped as she closed he eyes. Echofeather gaped.
"Wha......" Echofeather started to say. Something is defiantly wrong. Snoweagle thought.
AN: Yes, Cricketpaw did not get her warrior name because she was not ready. Thanks for Echo- or should i say Echofeather, Perry4464!
"WOOOOOO-HOOOOOOO!" Snowpaw screamed. "IM GOING TO BE A WARRIOR!!!" Snowpaw screamed louder. "THUNDERCLAN DOUBTED ME, SUCKS FOR THEM!"
"Keep it down!" Yelled a voice. Snowpaw froze and blushed.
"Who are-err- where are you?" Snowpaw asked into the abyss of grass. He knew where she was, because the white Starclan cat and Sorrelkit had given him a gift of feeling sound waves a couple of nights ago.
"The name's Echo." Replied the voice. Snowpaw found Echo. A light gray she-cat with a white chest and paws was lying in a nest of grass. She also had two jay feathers behind her ear.
"I claimed this as MY territory." Echo hissed. She had used the element of surprise. Then Echo pounced. Snowpaw looked at her visible ribs. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Is she going to eat me??? Snowkit thought. Claws clashed as each blow was scored- only to give up.
"I-i give up." Echo panted only a short while after. Snowpaw could tell she hadn't eaten in a while. "I'm not cut out for fighting, anyway."
"Errr... I have some food at errr... my camp. you wanna come?" Snowpaw wasked.
"WOULD I? OF COURSE I WOULD!" Echo exclaimed. And off they went.
...
Snoweagle, Frostflight, Raincloud ( I know), and Cricketpaw watched below a pile of stones, now called the Stonepile. Echo was about to become a medicne cat, to take Moss's place. After the ceremony, Snoweagle walked over to Echo, Now named Echofeather.
" You got what you wanted," Snoweagle said. Echofeather turned around, shocked. "You are one of us." Snoweagle told her.
"So I did." Echofeather scowled and stalked away to her new den. Snoweagle looked just in time to see Moss moving her kits to the Nursery.
"Horray!" Nightkit yelled.
"Hooray!" Lightkit tried to yell. Even though Moss nursed her back to health, Lightkit was still a little weak. Suddenly, Lightkit staggered and fell. coughing, she looked up at the clear blue sky.
"Stonefur....." Lightkit gasped as she closed he eyes. Echofeather gaped.
"Wha......" Echofeather started to say. Something is defiantly wrong. Snoweagle thought.
AN: Yes, Cricketpaw did not get her warrior name because she was not ready. Thanks for Echo- or should i say Echofeather, Perry4464!
Sunday, May 19, 2013
Chapter 14 : The strange thing behind Lightkit
Time had passed since Sorrelkit died. Nightkit and Lightkit were about to be apprentices. Cricketpaw, Rainpaw, Snowpaw, and Frostpaw were growing better at hunting and fighting, and patrolling. Even Moss was starting to recover. But there was one problem ( Or two. Fear.) in this recovering world.... Lightkit.
One minute she was talking to Cricketpaw, suddenly, seconds later, she collapsed, coughing. Cricketpaw backed away.
"MOOOOOOOOMMM!" Yelled Nightkit, fear in his voice. Lightkit was convulsing on the ground. Moss came rushing out of her den, just in time to see Lightkit's eyes close.
"Crookedstar...." Whispered Lightkit was she fell asleep.
" Oh, no. What..." Started Frostpaw. "...What.... what made this happen?" She asked. Rainpaw checked the Fresh-kill pile.
"It all looks okay." Rainpaw noted. Lightning came out of his den.
"What is going-" Lightning started, then looked at Lightkit, then made a hissing sound.
"Why did you hiss?" Asked Snowpaw.
"Because the cause could be..." Lightning trailed off.
Fear? Thought Snowpaw.
AN: Lightkit will live??? Or not??? HMMMMM....
One minute she was talking to Cricketpaw, suddenly, seconds later, she collapsed, coughing. Cricketpaw backed away.
"MOOOOOOOOMMM!" Yelled Nightkit, fear in his voice. Lightkit was convulsing on the ground. Moss came rushing out of her den, just in time to see Lightkit's eyes close.
"Crookedstar...." Whispered Lightkit was she fell asleep.
" Oh, no. What..." Started Frostpaw. "...What.... what made this happen?" She asked. Rainpaw checked the Fresh-kill pile.
"It all looks okay." Rainpaw noted. Lightning came out of his den.
"What is going-" Lightning started, then looked at Lightkit, then made a hissing sound.
"Why did you hiss?" Asked Snowpaw.
"Because the cause could be..." Lightning trailed off.
Fear? Thought Snowpaw.
AN: Lightkit will live??? Or not??? HMMMMM....
Sunday, May 12, 2013
Hey!
Hey!
I'm out of story ideas.
Also I changed my username. Pokemon is a intrest. a major one.
So yeah.
Bye.
I'm out of story ideas.
Also I changed my username. Pokemon is a intrest. a major one.
So yeah.
Bye.
Sunday, April 28, 2013
Chapter 13 (?): Sorrelkit
Snowpaw padded into Moss's den. He hoped Sorrelkit would not die- live through the night. Moss was his foster mother, after all. He padded into the den, and nodded off.
...
Snowpaw woke up. He was in Starclan's forest again. He tried to run free through the warm, calling, woods, but trees barred his path. Suddenly, the Starclan cat came up.
"Your'e not a Starclan warrior yet- you can't pass through." She sighed. Snowpaw padded up to the Starclan cat. Her white fur was gentle and loving.
"How is Sorrelkit?" Snowpaw asked, having to peel himself away from the pure love radiating fron the Starclan cat.
"Oh, it seems we have a visitor." the Starclan cat meowed, turning to the woods. A small kit with a dappled tortoiseshell fur came forth. Snowpaw could not believe it.
"S-Sorrelkit!" Snowpaw gasped.
"Hello." said Sorrelkit. The stars weaved into Sorrelkit's fur shimmered. Her eyes shown with knowledge far beyond her age. Then Sorrelkit looked up.
"Morning is coming." she said. the Starclan cat and Sorrelkit said their goodbyes and padded into the woods.
"Wait! wait!" Snowpaw called. But he knew he was slipping away from Starclan's forest.
...
"My kit! No! Sorrelkit! Sorrelkit..." Yowls of horror roused Snowpaw. He opened his eyes and looked at Moss. Moss was bending over a small, lifeless, creature.
"Sorrelkit!"
AN: Sadly, nobody really voted. :'( Goodbye Sorrelkit!
...
BAWWWWWLLLLLLLLL
...
Snowpaw woke up. He was in Starclan's forest again. He tried to run free through the warm, calling, woods, but trees barred his path. Suddenly, the Starclan cat came up.
"Your'e not a Starclan warrior yet- you can't pass through." She sighed. Snowpaw padded up to the Starclan cat. Her white fur was gentle and loving.
"How is Sorrelkit?" Snowpaw asked, having to peel himself away from the pure love radiating fron the Starclan cat.
"Oh, it seems we have a visitor." the Starclan cat meowed, turning to the woods. A small kit with a dappled tortoiseshell fur came forth. Snowpaw could not believe it.
"S-Sorrelkit!" Snowpaw gasped.
"Hello." said Sorrelkit. The stars weaved into Sorrelkit's fur shimmered. Her eyes shown with knowledge far beyond her age. Then Sorrelkit looked up.
"Morning is coming." she said. the Starclan cat and Sorrelkit said their goodbyes and padded into the woods.
"Wait! wait!" Snowpaw called. But he knew he was slipping away from Starclan's forest.
...
"My kit! No! Sorrelkit! Sorrelkit..." Yowls of horror roused Snowpaw. He opened his eyes and looked at Moss. Moss was bending over a small, lifeless, creature.
"Sorrelkit!"
AN: Sadly, nobody really voted. :'( Goodbye Sorrelkit!
...
BAWWWWWLLLLLLLLL
Friday, April 19, 2013
Chapter 12: Will Sorrelkit die?
Moss shoved Flamingpelt out of the way.
"Sorrelkit! Oh my poor kit!" Moss yowled. Moss turned to Flamingpelt. "How could you." Moss's voice was as cold as ice. Moss's other two kits huddled close to Lightning. Snowpaw padded over to Flamingpelt.
"I know where my claws struck." Flamingpelt meowed. "She'll die."
"That's not true." Frostpaw said was she padded over. Snowpaw felt his heart leap. What was Frostpaw doing?
"Yeah." Said Cricketpaw as she walked over to side with Frostpaw. Rainpaw padded over too.
"You'd better watch out." Rainpaw mewed. "Now that we really know who's side you are on, with will kill you." Flamingpelt looked at Sorrelkit, then Rainpaw. Flamingpelt's claws flashed out at Sorrelkit, scoring more claw marks. Then he vanished through the trees. Moss ran after him for a couple paces.
"Yeah, you'd better run!" Rainpaw yowled. Then he fell the the ground, laughing. Sorrelkit was still bleeding, now even heavier. The troop walked over to Sorrelkit and formed a tight barrier around Moss's three kits. Fear's warriors were coming closer, growling. The fight wasn't over. Sorrelkit's wounds were pouring a endless tide, and Sorrelkit's eyes were closing. Lightning looked at Sorrelkit.
"Retreat!" He yowled, and he picked up Sorrelkit ever so gently. The troop padded silently into the forest, deathly quiet.
AN: Snowkit will be visited by the Starclan cat that will reveal all. It was a tie, so I want everyone to vote! Otherwise, Sorrelkit will die! you have until Sunday! get to it!
"Sorrelkit! Oh my poor kit!" Moss yowled. Moss turned to Flamingpelt. "How could you." Moss's voice was as cold as ice. Moss's other two kits huddled close to Lightning. Snowpaw padded over to Flamingpelt.
"I know where my claws struck." Flamingpelt meowed. "She'll die."
"That's not true." Frostpaw said was she padded over. Snowpaw felt his heart leap. What was Frostpaw doing?
"Yeah." Said Cricketpaw as she walked over to side with Frostpaw. Rainpaw padded over too.
"You'd better watch out." Rainpaw mewed. "Now that we really know who's side you are on, with will kill you." Flamingpelt looked at Sorrelkit, then Rainpaw. Flamingpelt's claws flashed out at Sorrelkit, scoring more claw marks. Then he vanished through the trees. Moss ran after him for a couple paces.
"Yeah, you'd better run!" Rainpaw yowled. Then he fell the the ground, laughing. Sorrelkit was still bleeding, now even heavier. The troop walked over to Sorrelkit and formed a tight barrier around Moss's three kits. Fear's warriors were coming closer, growling. The fight wasn't over. Sorrelkit's wounds were pouring a endless tide, and Sorrelkit's eyes were closing. Lightning looked at Sorrelkit.
"Retreat!" He yowled, and he picked up Sorrelkit ever so gently. The troop padded silently into the forest, deathly quiet.
AN: Snowkit will be visited by the Starclan cat that will reveal all. It was a tie, so I want everyone to vote! Otherwise, Sorrelkit will die! you have until Sunday! get to it!
Tuesday, April 16, 2013
Sorrelkkit... Oh Sorrelkit....
Snowpaw looked down from his position in the tree... over Fear's camp... right...over...her...den. No wonder they call this place the Forest Of Shadows. Snowpaw thought. So dark and spooky. Snowpaw inched his way over to the wasp's nest and heard the drowsy zzzzzzzz.
"A-ok." Snowpaw whispered. A cold wind shook the branches and he latched on with his claws. He looked around the camp's border. Even though Fear's camp was at high activity, they did not notice their enemies above and around.
"Snowpaw?" asked Frostpaw. her station was below Snowpaw's. Yeah, he had thought. The best place to get stung by a hundred wasps coming at you.
"Yeah?" Snowpaw asked.
"That Flamingpelt seems a little... strange. It seems he actually LIKES Fear." Frostpaw meowed.
Snowpaw nearly fell out of the tree.
"Whaaaaat?" He yowled. Fear's campmates looked up at him. Great. Thought Snowpaw. They are going to notice the big, fluffy, snowball in the tree. And the exact thing happened. It was now or never. Snowpaw dropped the wasp nest. suddenly, the wind carried it to Flamingpelt.
"Starclan, NO!!" Snowpaw yelled. But then he saw something scary. Sorrelkit was under Flamingpelt, and Flamingpelt's claw was raised in a..... No... Snowpaw thought. The killing blow...
AN: Exciting. Should I kill Sorrelkit? Please comment your'e opinion!
"A-ok." Snowpaw whispered. A cold wind shook the branches and he latched on with his claws. He looked around the camp's border. Even though Fear's camp was at high activity, they did not notice their enemies above and around.
"Snowpaw?" asked Frostpaw. her station was below Snowpaw's. Yeah, he had thought. The best place to get stung by a hundred wasps coming at you.
"Yeah?" Snowpaw asked.
"That Flamingpelt seems a little... strange. It seems he actually LIKES Fear." Frostpaw meowed.
Snowpaw nearly fell out of the tree.
"Whaaaaat?" He yowled. Fear's campmates looked up at him. Great. Thought Snowpaw. They are going to notice the big, fluffy, snowball in the tree. And the exact thing happened. It was now or never. Snowpaw dropped the wasp nest. suddenly, the wind carried it to Flamingpelt.
"Starclan, NO!!" Snowpaw yelled. But then he saw something scary. Sorrelkit was under Flamingpelt, and Flamingpelt's claw was raised in a..... No... Snowpaw thought. The killing blow...
AN: Exciting. Should I kill Sorrelkit? Please comment your'e opinion!
Sunday, April 14, 2013
Chapter 10: The good cats' plan
Moss led the group trough the tall grass, with Flamingpelt, because, even if he broke the fourth wall, the did USE to be part of Fear's group.
"Ssssh." Moss whispered as she looked at Fear. Dust was with Fear. Snowpaw could hear fear clearly.
"Lightning's tribe is not here!" Fear said angirly.
"So what?" Dust said.
"We don't get to kill every one of them!" Fear growled. Kill. Snowpaw thought. Kill. They want to kill me?
"WE'd best get a move on and keep looking. They could be ANYWHERE." Fear said. Then Fear and Dust disappeared into Lightning's territory.
"It's time to attack Fear's camp." Moss said quietly. Snowpaw was about to yowl his anger to Starclan. Thet're so.. so.. Snowpaw couldn't think of a good word.
"Okay! Listen up!" Lightning yowled. "Ok, we will divide into two groups." Wing and your kits and Flamimingpelt, you are one group. Everyone else, another group. I'll take Moss's kits. Now go!"
Snowpaw watched as Frostpaw disappeared into the grass, fear showing in her eyes.
"Hey! Wait for me!" Snowpaw shouted.
"Shhhhh! Fear!" Cricketpaw said as she slid into disappearance. Snowpaw padded on with Moss until they reached a thick forest. Moss paused and called everyone together.
"Now." Moss said. "Gather up close, so we arn't heard. Everyone gathered close. "Now, here's the plan...
AN: Oooooh, a cliffhanger!
"Ssssh." Moss whispered as she looked at Fear. Dust was with Fear. Snowpaw could hear fear clearly.
"Lightning's tribe is not here!" Fear said angirly.
"So what?" Dust said.
"We don't get to kill every one of them!" Fear growled. Kill. Snowpaw thought. Kill. They want to kill me?
"WE'd best get a move on and keep looking. They could be ANYWHERE." Fear said. Then Fear and Dust disappeared into Lightning's territory.
"It's time to attack Fear's camp." Moss said quietly. Snowpaw was about to yowl his anger to Starclan. Thet're so.. so.. Snowpaw couldn't think of a good word.
"Okay! Listen up!" Lightning yowled. "Ok, we will divide into two groups." Wing and your kits and Flamimingpelt, you are one group. Everyone else, another group. I'll take Moss's kits. Now go!"
Snowpaw watched as Frostpaw disappeared into the grass, fear showing in her eyes.
"Hey! Wait for me!" Snowpaw shouted.
"Shhhhh! Fear!" Cricketpaw said as she slid into disappearance. Snowpaw padded on with Moss until they reached a thick forest. Moss paused and called everyone together.
"Now." Moss said. "Gather up close, so we arn't heard. Everyone gathered close. "Now, here's the plan...
AN: Oooooh, a cliffhanger!
Saturday, April 13, 2013
Chapter 9: Breaking the 4th wall and Flaningpelt
Snowpaw turned around and around in a feild outside the pride's territory. He knew this was part of the plan... but he was confused. Why? Why? Why? He asked over and over. Why? Why? Why? Suddenly, he noticed a rainbow, glittery wall. oooh! the 4th wall! I've only heard legends about it!?! Snowpaw walked over to the wall. I wonder... He thought. Snowpaw licked the wall. Snowpaw felt the ground rumble. He watched as the wall was shattered as a cat flew out. On the other side of the wall, a female twoleg with red hair stared angrily at the cat.
"hello." Said the cat. "I'm Flamingpelt. I come from Fear's tribe- but i was teleported out and brought on the other side of the 4th wall. the twoleg through me through the 4th wall."
Smowpaw looked at Flamingpelt, then at the shattered wall. Rainpaw walked up.
"oooh!!! You broke the 4th wall!!!!! I'm telling!" Rainpaw yelled. Then he ran off to tell Lightning.
"Uh-oh." said Snowpaw.
AN: Lol. This blog needed a chapter- so we have a funny one!
"hello." Said the cat. "I'm Flamingpelt. I come from Fear's tribe- but i was teleported out and brought on the other side of the 4th wall. the twoleg through me through the 4th wall."
Smowpaw looked at Flamingpelt, then at the shattered wall. Rainpaw walked up.
"oooh!!! You broke the 4th wall!!!!! I'm telling!" Rainpaw yelled. Then he ran off to tell Lightning.
"Uh-oh." said Snowpaw.
AN: Lol. This blog needed a chapter- so we have a funny one!
Thursday, April 11, 2013
Sunday, April 7, 2013
Chapter 8: Spy
Snowpaw woke up. It's moonhigh... he thought. ugh. who would be chatting now? Snowpaw peeped out of Moss's den. There was Dust- and Fear! Fear and Dust? Snowpaw thought. How could Dust be a traitor? Snowpaw walked over to Moss's nest. "Moss! Moss, wake up!" Snowpaw called. Moss woke up.
"Sno-" Moss started.
"Shhh!" Snowpaw told Moss. "Dust... Nevermind, ill show you." Snowpaw led Moss to the entrance. Moss gasped.
"But why Dust?' Asked Moss.
"I don't know." said Snowpaw. "Let's get the pride OUT OF HERE!" Quickly, quietly, Moss and Snowpaw led the cats out of the dens, and into the shadows.
"Cool- like a real warrior mission!" Frostpaw said.
"No, more like a mistake." Rainpaw growled, eyeing Dust.
"Mousebrain." Wing said quietly. Snowpaw watched Dust and Fear leave. Fear called to dust,
"And you are going to attack Lightning while he's asleep?' Fear asked. Lightning growled and stepped forward.
"Yes." Dust called back.
"Good. My minions will take care of the others. How weak they are." Fear sneered as she spoke. "You are lucky you are on my side, or else you would be dead by now. Snowpaw shuddered.
"Mommy, she gonna get us?" Sorrelkit asked.
"No. We will hide and trick Fear and her group." Moss told her kit.
AN: Soooooo.... Help. I need story ideas.
"Sno-" Moss started.
"Shhh!" Snowpaw told Moss. "Dust... Nevermind, ill show you." Snowpaw led Moss to the entrance. Moss gasped.
"But why Dust?' Asked Moss.
"I don't know." said Snowpaw. "Let's get the pride OUT OF HERE!" Quickly, quietly, Moss and Snowpaw led the cats out of the dens, and into the shadows.
"Cool- like a real warrior mission!" Frostpaw said.
"No, more like a mistake." Rainpaw growled, eyeing Dust.
"Mousebrain." Wing said quietly. Snowpaw watched Dust and Fear leave. Fear called to dust,
"And you are going to attack Lightning while he's asleep?' Fear asked. Lightning growled and stepped forward.
"Yes." Dust called back.
"Good. My minions will take care of the others. How weak they are." Fear sneered as she spoke. "You are lucky you are on my side, or else you would be dead by now. Snowpaw shuddered.
"Mommy, she gonna get us?" Sorrelkit asked.
"No. We will hide and trick Fear and her group." Moss told her kit.
AN: Soooooo.... Help. I need story ideas.
Thursday, April 4, 2013
Chapter 7: Start of a clan
Snowkit woke up. Today's the day! he thought. Today is the day I start a clan- with a game. Snowkit padded out of Moss's den, taking care not to wake the kits. The clan seemed busy. I wonder what's up with everyone? he thought as he padded over to his friends.
"Hi Snowkit!" Frost, Rain, and Cricket yelled together.
"Hi, Frost, Rain, Cricket." said Snowkit. "Today, let's play Clan."
"How?" Asked Cricket. Snowkit explained how a clan works.
"And we are apprentice-age, so let's use apprentice names. I'll be Snowpaw." Snowkit said.
"Then i'm Rainpaw!" said Rain.
"I'm Cricketpaw." said Cricket.
"I'm Frostpaw!" said Frost. "Let's play." For a while, Snowpaw, Rainpaw, Frostpaw, and Cricketpaw decided on mentors.
"Can i be Lightning's apprentice?" asked Frostpaw.
"You can pretend that you are." said Snowpaw.
"I wanna be Wing's apprentice." said Cricketpaw.
"You can, i guess, although i've never heard of it." said Snowpaw.
"I'm gonna be Dust's apprentice." said Rainpaw.
"You can't be Dust's, she's a elder, but well see. I'm Moss's." said Snowpaw. "Now we need a clan name."
"Frostclan!" said Frostpaw. everyone agreed, it seemed like a name, and nobody realized Frostclan was just like Frostpaw's name.
AN: Lol.
"Hi Snowkit!" Frost, Rain, and Cricket yelled together.
"Hi, Frost, Rain, Cricket." said Snowkit. "Today, let's play Clan."
"How?" Asked Cricket. Snowkit explained how a clan works.
"And we are apprentice-age, so let's use apprentice names. I'll be Snowpaw." Snowkit said.
"Then i'm Rainpaw!" said Rain.
"I'm Cricketpaw." said Cricket.
"I'm Frostpaw!" said Frost. "Let's play." For a while, Snowpaw, Rainpaw, Frostpaw, and Cricketpaw decided on mentors.
"Can i be Lightning's apprentice?" asked Frostpaw.
"You can pretend that you are." said Snowpaw.
"I wanna be Wing's apprentice." said Cricketpaw.
"You can, i guess, although i've never heard of it." said Snowpaw.
"I'm gonna be Dust's apprentice." said Rainpaw.
"You can't be Dust's, she's a elder, but well see. I'm Moss's." said Snowpaw. "Now we need a clan name."
"Frostclan!" said Frostpaw. everyone agreed, it seemed like a name, and nobody realized Frostclan was just like Frostpaw's name.
AN: Lol.
Wednesday, April 3, 2013
Chapter 6: Learning + Moss's kits!
Snowkit looked up. A moon had passed since Fear had stolen him and his friends. In that time, Snowkit learned Moss was a medicne cat, a healer. "Good morning, Snowkit!" Said Moss. "Can you get me some tansy?" she asked. Huh? what is tansy? wondered Snowkit. "What does tansy look like?" Snowkit asked. Moss described the tansy, and Snowkit brought it to her. "Thanks, Snowkit." said Moss.
Just then, Dust walked in. "Moss!" Dust bellowed. "Whatta ya need, Dust?" Moss called from inside the den.
"I got myself that stomach pain. AGAIN. STUFF NOW, TALK LATTER." Dust said grumpily. Moss "served" Dust the herbs, and Dust forced herself to choke it down. Dust has had that stomach pain for a long tine it seems. Thought Snowkit. Maybe she won't get better from it. Snowkit walked over to Moss. "Why'd you need the tansy?" Snowkit asked Moss. "Because my kit's are coming, and i need to ease the pain." "Ok!" Said Snowkit. "I'm going to play with Cricket and Frost, K'?" "Ok" said Moss. Snowkit walked outside.
It's so peaceful! Thought Snowkit... Until he saw Cricket and Frost. "ROOAR I'm the mighty Lightning!" bellowed Frost. "GRRRR I'm the awesome Fear!" Screamed Cricket. Rain went over to cricket. "YOU think FEAR is AWESOME?!" Asked Rain. "No-" Started Cricket, she was broke off by Frost. "Rain! stop doing captital word, uncaptital word!" Frost yelled at Rain. "Your confusing the reader!" The arguement was broke by Moss yelling, "Snowkit! My kits!"
Snowkit rushed to Moss's den. Already, there were 3 kits. Snowkit felt her belly. There were no more. Snowkit started up the kit's heartbeats. There was a black one, a white one, and a golden one. Awww. They look so sweet! Snowkit thought as they started to suckle. "Can you give them clan names?" asked Snowkit.
"How?" asked Moss. "Just choose a name, like Shadow, and add "kit" to the end." Snowkit explained. "Then the black one is Nightkit, the Golden one is Sorrelkit, and the white one is... Oh! Lightkit!" Moss said.
...
Goodnight, Nightkit, Sorrelkit, Lightkit. Snowkit thought as he drifted off into sleep.
AN: Yay! Finally! Kits! Yes, Snowkit will ask for a apprentice name next, After they play the "Game"
Tuesday, April 2, 2013
Chapter 5: Escape from Fear. Find your Destiny.
Rain looked up at Fear. Fear looked down at Rain.
"Where is our mom?" Rain asked.
"Somewhere secret." Fear replied coldly. Rain stood up and looked Fear in the eye bravely. That Rain... does he even know who fear is? Snowkit wondered. "Do you somehow have mom?" Rain said coldly. "Rain. My friends will take care of her." Fear gave Rain the evil eye as she spoke. Rain sat down. He hid behind Frost, who was looking up at Fear. "Fear, our mommies will rescue us! Just you wait!" Frost yowled. Fear glared at Frost. Suddenly, Fear unsheathed her claws and attacked Frost. "Moss! Moss! Help us! Moss!" Snowkit suddenly yelled out without thinking. He saw claws flash at his face. Everything went black.
...
Snowkit woke up. He was in a shimmering, starry forest. A white cat padded up to Snowkit. "Who are you?" Snowkit asked. He could hear! "Do not be afraid." The starry cat told him. "You are brave. You are DESTINED to turn this pride into a great clan." "How?" Snowkit asked. " First, tell your friends about playing clan. Then, slowly turn it into the real thing." the Starclan cat replied, smiling.
"But why these cats?" Snowkit asked.
"Sit down. I will tell you a story." Said the cat.
The story began. "Long ago, there was 5 clans, Thunderclan, Shadowclan, Windclan, Riverclan, and Skyclan. They all lived in harmony for a while, and frighted only sometimes. Then, one day, Skyclan's territory was reduced to rubble. Monsters surrounded their camp, ready to pounce. Their leader, Cloudstar, had no choice but to abandon the territory. It happened on the night of the gathering, so Cloudstar brought his clan to Fourtrees. He told the other leaders what was happening, and asked if he could have a little of each of their territory. Redstar, the Thunderclan leader, said, "We have too many mouths to feed." Dawnstar, leader of Shadowclan, said, "The rats are taking over our territory!" Windclan and Riverclan both had food problems. So Skyclan was forced to leave, and they perished." So i have to rebuild Skyckan? Snowkit thought. As if she was able to read his thoughts, The Starclan cat said, "No, Another cat will do that in the future. Let me continue." Snowkit prepared to hear more. "When Skyclan left, a few cats left the group, because they had no trust in Cloudstar. You found their decendants." The story ended. The starry world started to fade away. "Go! Return to your body and build the lost clan!" The cat's voice was fading away. "Go!"
...
Snowkit woke up. His side hurt. "Snowkit? Snowkit!" Frost was standing over him. "Fear is asleep. let's tiptoe past her." Frost spoke in a hushed voice. "Comeon, Rain, Cricket." Each kit didn't dare breathe as they tiptoed past. They made it past Fear! They didn't feel safe, so they tiptoed all the way back to camp. "Moss! Wing!" Snowkit called in a whisper. "We snuck past fear and made it home!" Moss and Wing came out of their hole. "Snowkit! oh, Snowkit! I was so worried about you!" Moss said as she covered Snowkit with licks. Suddenly, Moss stopped. " I feel like you have been my son forever." Me too. Thought Snowkit.
"I love you mom."
AN: I could not resist writing this chapter! I really, really like the ending, he gets to say I love you to his mom.
Rain looked up at Fear. Fear looked down at Rain.
"Where is our mom?" Rain asked.
"Somewhere secret." Fear replied coldly. Rain stood up and looked Fear in the eye bravely. That Rain... does he even know who fear is? Snowkit wondered. "Do you somehow have mom?" Rain said coldly. "Rain. My friends will take care of her." Fear gave Rain the evil eye as she spoke. Rain sat down. He hid behind Frost, who was looking up at Fear. "Fear, our mommies will rescue us! Just you wait!" Frost yowled. Fear glared at Frost. Suddenly, Fear unsheathed her claws and attacked Frost. "Moss! Moss! Help us! Moss!" Snowkit suddenly yelled out without thinking. He saw claws flash at his face. Everything went black.
...
Snowkit woke up. He was in a shimmering, starry forest. A white cat padded up to Snowkit. "Who are you?" Snowkit asked. He could hear! "Do not be afraid." The starry cat told him. "You are brave. You are DESTINED to turn this pride into a great clan." "How?" Snowkit asked. " First, tell your friends about playing clan. Then, slowly turn it into the real thing." the Starclan cat replied, smiling.
"But why these cats?" Snowkit asked.
"Sit down. I will tell you a story." Said the cat.
The story began. "Long ago, there was 5 clans, Thunderclan, Shadowclan, Windclan, Riverclan, and Skyclan. They all lived in harmony for a while, and frighted only sometimes. Then, one day, Skyclan's territory was reduced to rubble. Monsters surrounded their camp, ready to pounce. Their leader, Cloudstar, had no choice but to abandon the territory. It happened on the night of the gathering, so Cloudstar brought his clan to Fourtrees. He told the other leaders what was happening, and asked if he could have a little of each of their territory. Redstar, the Thunderclan leader, said, "We have too many mouths to feed." Dawnstar, leader of Shadowclan, said, "The rats are taking over our territory!" Windclan and Riverclan both had food problems. So Skyclan was forced to leave, and they perished." So i have to rebuild Skyckan? Snowkit thought. As if she was able to read his thoughts, The Starclan cat said, "No, Another cat will do that in the future. Let me continue." Snowkit prepared to hear more. "When Skyclan left, a few cats left the group, because they had no trust in Cloudstar. You found their decendants." The story ended. The starry world started to fade away. "Go! Return to your body and build the lost clan!" The cat's voice was fading away. "Go!"
...
Snowkit woke up. His side hurt. "Snowkit? Snowkit!" Frost was standing over him. "Fear is asleep. let's tiptoe past her." Frost spoke in a hushed voice. "Comeon, Rain, Cricket." Each kit didn't dare breathe as they tiptoed past. They made it past Fear! They didn't feel safe, so they tiptoed all the way back to camp. "Moss! Wing!" Snowkit called in a whisper. "We snuck past fear and made it home!" Moss and Wing came out of their hole. "Snowkit! oh, Snowkit! I was so worried about you!" Moss said as she covered Snowkit with licks. Suddenly, Moss stopped. " I feel like you have been my son forever." Me too. Thought Snowkit.
"I love you mom."
AN: I could not resist writing this chapter! I really, really like the ending, he gets to say I love you to his mom.
Chapter 4: Kits and Kidnapping
Lightning looked at Moss. A old grey cat looked at moss. Well, EVERY cat looked at Moss. "I found him on the Monster Path, and he had no mom. I told him where we were going, and adopted him on the way." Moss explained. The grey cat looked at Moss. "Moss, you already have 2 kits, and Wing has three!" The grey cat shot back. "What would YOU do if you found a kitten with no mom, all alone, Dust?" asked Moss.
Dust had lost. Dust quietly disappeared down a hole in the ground. Does that go to a den? Do all the holes go to dens? Snowkit wondered. Lightning looked at Snowkit.
"What is your name?" Lightning asked.
"He's deaf." Moss said. "Dear, Put your paw on Lightning's throat and you'll hear him." Moss told Snowkit. Snowkit did as he was told, and he could hear Lightning as he repeated what he said.
"I'm Snowkit." Snowkit said. Three kits bounced out of a den. One was white with different colored eyes, one was pale blue, and one was golden-brown, like a cricket. A cat with wing-like patterns came out with them. Is that Wing? Snowkit wondered.
"Hi! I'm Frost." The white kit with different eyes said. " The blue kit is Rain, and the golden one is Cricket." Frost continued. "Our mom is over there. Her name is Wing. Are you gonna be a good playmate?"
Rain and Cricket came over. "H-h-hi. I'm Cricket." Cricket sure seems shy. Snowkit thought. Cricket looked thoughtfully at Snowkit. "Do you like to play?" She asked. Snowkit did not have time to respond, because Lightning bellowed, "Pride, the sun is setting. please go to your'e sleep-hole and wake to a new day."
Wing meowed, "This way." Moss followed Wing, and Snowkit followed Moss. Snowkit closed his eyes. What a day. He thought.
...
Snowkit woke up. there was no Moss around him, keeping him warm. He looked at Cricket, who was eyeing a Cream-and-brown figure. Oh no.. thought Snowkit as he looked up at the cat. It's FEAR.
AN: Sudden ending, right? Dust seems mean, the kits are overly friendly, and we haven't met Rain yet! What a day, what a day.
Lightning looked at Moss. A old grey cat looked at moss. Well, EVERY cat looked at Moss. "I found him on the Monster Path, and he had no mom. I told him where we were going, and adopted him on the way." Moss explained. The grey cat looked at Moss. "Moss, you already have 2 kits, and Wing has three!" The grey cat shot back. "What would YOU do if you found a kitten with no mom, all alone, Dust?" asked Moss.
Dust had lost. Dust quietly disappeared down a hole in the ground. Does that go to a den? Do all the holes go to dens? Snowkit wondered. Lightning looked at Snowkit.
"What is your name?" Lightning asked.
"He's deaf." Moss said. "Dear, Put your paw on Lightning's throat and you'll hear him." Moss told Snowkit. Snowkit did as he was told, and he could hear Lightning as he repeated what he said.
"I'm Snowkit." Snowkit said. Three kits bounced out of a den. One was white with different colored eyes, one was pale blue, and one was golden-brown, like a cricket. A cat with wing-like patterns came out with them. Is that Wing? Snowkit wondered.
"Hi! I'm Frost." The white kit with different eyes said. " The blue kit is Rain, and the golden one is Cricket." Frost continued. "Our mom is over there. Her name is Wing. Are you gonna be a good playmate?"
Rain and Cricket came over. "H-h-hi. I'm Cricket." Cricket sure seems shy. Snowkit thought. Cricket looked thoughtfully at Snowkit. "Do you like to play?" She asked. Snowkit did not have time to respond, because Lightning bellowed, "Pride, the sun is setting. please go to your'e sleep-hole and wake to a new day."
Wing meowed, "This way." Moss followed Wing, and Snowkit followed Moss. Snowkit closed his eyes. What a day. He thought.
...
Snowkit woke up. there was no Moss around him, keeping him warm. He looked at Cricket, who was eyeing a Cream-and-brown figure. Oh no.. thought Snowkit as he looked up at the cat. It's FEAR.
AN: Sudden ending, right? Dust seems mean, the kits are overly friendly, and we haven't met Rain yet! What a day, what a day.
Monday, April 1, 2013
Chapter 3: Moss the mysterous...
"That's a monster path, young one." Moss told Snowkit later. "You saw the monster. All they seem to do is carry twolegs in their bellies and never leave the path. They seem so simpleminded." Snowkit felt the earth shake beneath his tiny snow-white paws. "Snowkit! That's Fear! Get under this bush now!" Moss suddenly screamed. They slid under the bush just in time to see a brown cat with cream-colored stripes down it's back.
When the cat passed, Moss whispered, "She's Fear. She's a ruthless killer, so I advise you that you stay out of her way." Snowkit shivered at the thought of Fear killing him. "I'm afraid she'll kill my kits." Moss said, and Snowkit noticed her swelled belly for the first time. "She killed my mate, Shadow, and i'm afraid she'll kill me next." Snowkit thought about this. I just met Moss, and now she's telling me all about her life? Snowkit thought. Finally, Snowkit spoke. "How did she become like this?" Snowkit asked Moss. "No cat knows." Answered Moss. Snowkit shook with fright.
"Well, me and my friends have a small camp, should i show you it?" asked Moss.
"Okay" said Snowkit. Moss followed a small path until they came to a clearing. Several cats were sitting, apparently waiting for Moss. "Moss, I was so worried about you!" a yellow lion-like cat exclaimed.
"Lightning, I am fine! It's not like Fear is hunting me down." This cat- Lightning, must be Moss's new mate Snowkit thought. Lightning looked at Snowkit.
"Who are you, kit?" asked Lightning.
"I adopted him." Moss quickly exclaimed.
AN: What the what??? Anyway, it seems Snowkit has a new mom- Moss!
"That's a monster path, young one." Moss told Snowkit later. "You saw the monster. All they seem to do is carry twolegs in their bellies and never leave the path. They seem so simpleminded." Snowkit felt the earth shake beneath his tiny snow-white paws. "Snowkit! That's Fear! Get under this bush now!" Moss suddenly screamed. They slid under the bush just in time to see a brown cat with cream-colored stripes down it's back.
When the cat passed, Moss whispered, "She's Fear. She's a ruthless killer, so I advise you that you stay out of her way." Snowkit shivered at the thought of Fear killing him. "I'm afraid she'll kill my kits." Moss said, and Snowkit noticed her swelled belly for the first time. "She killed my mate, Shadow, and i'm afraid she'll kill me next." Snowkit thought about this. I just met Moss, and now she's telling me all about her life? Snowkit thought. Finally, Snowkit spoke. "How did she become like this?" Snowkit asked Moss. "No cat knows." Answered Moss. Snowkit shook with fright.
"Well, me and my friends have a small camp, should i show you it?" asked Moss.
"Okay" said Snowkit. Moss followed a small path until they came to a clearing. Several cats were sitting, apparently waiting for Moss. "Moss, I was so worried about you!" a yellow lion-like cat exclaimed.
"Lightning, I am fine! It's not like Fear is hunting me down." This cat- Lightning, must be Moss's new mate Snowkit thought. Lightning looked at Snowkit.
"Who are you, kit?" asked Lightning.
"I adopted him." Moss quickly exclaimed.
AN: What the what??? Anyway, it seems Snowkit has a new mom- Moss!
Sunday, March 31, 2013
Chapter 2: MONSTER ATTACK!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
Snowkit opened his eyes. He was laying on a hard, flat surface. Snowkit stretched his stiff mussles. The felt them crack and he winced. A rock in his veiw was jumpimg. Suddenly, the ground was shaking. The air even seemed to shake. He smelled the a air. A HORRIBLE stench drifted into his nose. He was bathed in a horrible bright light. The monster's blazing eyes seemed to glare at him. He felt something pick him up into he air.
"Mom! You came?" Snowkit asked. The cat leapt off the path.
"I'm Moss, and i'm not your mother." the cat Answered. "What's a scrap like you doing here?"
Author's note: I'm Bak! Ugh, Nother' short 1.
Friday, March 22, 2013
Chapter 1: I can fly high in the sky... and fall too.
Snowkit had been watching the world go by for a hour. He had gotten used to the digging and the feeling he would fall. A lake? Cool. Snowkit thought. Suddenly, felt blood on his cheek. It wasn't his blood... Suddenly, He was falling. Snowkit looked up. The eagle was bleeding heavily, and steadily getting smaller. Thump! Thump! Snowkit was hanging from a small branch in a tall tree. Snap! Thud. Everything went black.
Author's Note (AN) : I'm going on a trip! Tommrow! For a week! With no internet! (bad position to be Ch. 1...) Lol short post, i'll make it up.
Snowkit had been watching the world go by for a hour. He had gotten used to the digging and the feeling he would fall. A lake? Cool. Snowkit thought. Suddenly, felt blood on his cheek. It wasn't his blood... Suddenly, He was falling. Snowkit looked up. The eagle was bleeding heavily, and steadily getting smaller. Thump! Thump! Snowkit was hanging from a small branch in a tall tree. Snap! Thud. Everything went black.
Author's Note (AN) : I'm going on a trip! Tommrow! For a week! With no internet! (bad position to be Ch. 1...) Lol short post, i'll make it up.
Sunday, March 17, 2013
Prolouge: Snached
I love you. Snowkit had always wanted to say I love you to his mother. Everyone could not be heard by him. He was deaf. His mother, Dappletail, knew this kit will be her last, she was as old as any elder now.
Snowkit was out in the clearing, playing with a moss ball. He looked up from playing. Bramblekit and Twanykit were running away. Why are they running away? Snowkit thought. Then he looked up. A eagle Was swooping down, straight for him! He tried to run, but it was too late. He was snatched. He squealed in pain. Dappletail was trying to catch the eagle, but the eagle was already climbing higher and higher. "Mommy!" Snowkit screamed, but the small snowy white kit was to high up to be heard.
Author's Note: Like it? I can only post on weekends and friday.
I love you. Snowkit had always wanted to say I love you to his mother. Everyone could not be heard by him. He was deaf. His mother, Dappletail, knew this kit will be her last, she was as old as any elder now.
Snowkit was out in the clearing, playing with a moss ball. He looked up from playing. Bramblekit and Twanykit were running away. Why are they running away? Snowkit thought. Then he looked up. A eagle Was swooping down, straight for him! He tried to run, but it was too late. He was snatched. He squealed in pain. Dappletail was trying to catch the eagle, but the eagle was already climbing higher and higher. "Mommy!" Snowkit screamed, but the small snowy white kit was to high up to be heard.
Author's Note: Like it? I can only post on weekends and friday.
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